#Scriptchat TOPIC: MISERY and sex
We normally have the same topic on both EURO and USA chats, but occasionally international holidays don’t coincide. Tonight, we merged misery with sex. Oh yeah, you read that right. EURO talked the script MISERY and USA talked writing sex scenes and the use of profanity. You can imagine the heat coming off the screen in the States. Grab some ice and enjoy! @jeannevb
EURO moderator: Mina Zaher, @DreamsGrafter
USA moderator: Jeanne Veillette Bowerman, @jeannevb
EURO CHAT: MISERY
7:01 pm DreamsGrafter: EURO #SCRIPTCHAT O'CLOCK ... we're talking MISERY tonight. Who wants to kick off? ;)
7:01 pm scriptchat: RT @jeannevb: FYI,EURO #scriptchat talks MISERY... USA chat talking sex scenes/profanity. Don't confuse MISERY w sex. #justsayin
7:01 pm dramadj: I just think this Misery script is a SCREENplay... you know. The author is a cutter, too #scriptchat
7:02 pm DreamsGrafter: #scriptchat RT @twatterer: Misery is great example of not being *too* nasty to ur protag: the ankle break was actually amputation in novel >
7:02 pm DreamsGrafter: #scriptchat RT @twatterer: Goldman said "They hated her, loved the film. If she'd cut his feet off they wld've hated her *and* hated movie."
7:03 pm DreamsGrafter: RT @dramadj: I just think this Misery script is a SCREENplay... you know. The author is a cutter, too #scriptchat
7:03 pm DreamsGrafter: @dramadj Can you elaborate? #scriptchat
7:04 pm davidpbaker: RT @DreamsGrafter: EURO #SCRIPTCHAT O'CLOCK ... we're talking MISERY tonight. Who wants to kick off? ;)
7:05 pm DreamsGrafter: Btw, I wrote an article on page of MISERY: http://bit.ly/8YPeAM Methinks it's quite perfect. #scriptchat
7:05 pm dramadj: @DreamsGrafter Its "Cut To:" everywhere. I know directors and cutters who would break out in tears reading this. #scriptchat
7:05 pm LisaFromNYC: Which draft did you all read? I read the earlier draft #ScriptChat
7:06 pm DreamsGrafter: @dramadj Don't you think that was more the style of screenwriting back then? i.e. style has evolved? More white space? #scriptchat
7:07 pm DreamsGrafter: 1989 draft, which one did you read? RT @LisaFromNYC: Which draft did you all read? I read the earlier draft #ScriptChat
7:08 pm dramadj: @DreamsGrafter That would be my question. Was screenwriting more back then? #scriptchat
7:09 pm DreamsGrafter: @dramadj Definitely. Have you read a Hitchcock script? There's so much in there, a screenwriter today cldn't get away w/. #scriptchat
7:09 pm LisaFromNYC: July1989. I skimmed the *scene* (due 2 the horror) but I got the impression his foot was amputated. There was blood & he said it #ScriptChat
7:09 pm rabbitandcrow: Seems impossible to talk about the Misery script without talking about Goldman's book on adaptation. #scriptchat
7:09 pm Sofluid: #scriptchat Script v. Film? I liked the intensity of the script, which was lost a little in the film, tho appreciated additions to film...
7:10 pm DreamsGrafter: So who has any thoughts on the portrayal of Annie? How her character develops? #scriptchat
7:10 pm DreamsGrafter: RT @rabbitandcrow: Seems impossible to talk about the Misery script without talking about Goldman's book on adaptation. #scriptchat
7:10 pm dramadj: @DreamsGrafter I'm getting the point. My opinion is: if the author does so he better be a really good cutter, too. #scriptchat
7:10 pm DreamsGrafter: @rabbitandcrow I haven't read his book on adaptation. Does he talk about his process w/ Misery? #scriptchat
7:11 pm Mockwriter: @DreamsGrafter Thanks for the link for the Misery Script. Another to add to the pile. #scriptchat
7:11 pm LisaFromNYC: @Sofluid I thought the script was more intense as well. #ScriptChat
7:12 pm sweettweenie: will be avoiding #scriptchat tonight as didn't get to read script or see movie, so no spoilers. Might join in the US sex talk instead ;-)
7:13 pm rabbitandcrow: @DreamsGrafter I read the novel not long ago & Annie is really overwhelming in the book. Frightening. #scriptchat
7:13 pm DreamsGrafter: @Mockwriter Definitely, a must-read. A perfectly crafted thriller script. Enjoy! #scriptchat
7:13 pm DreamsGrafter: Why do you think the film made the changes it did? RT @LisaFromNYC: @Sofluid I thought the script was more intense as well. #ScriptChat
7:14 pm dwacon: RT @scriptchat: RT @jeannevb: FYI,EURO #scriptchat talks MISERY... USA chat talking sex scenes/profanity. Don't confuse MISERY w sex. #justsayin
7:14 pm LisaFromNYC: There were a lot of "cut tos" but after a while I didn't see them & script then felt seamless w/o slugs #ScriptChat
7:14 pm DreamsGrafter: @rabbitandcrow Did you see @twatterer's tweet about if Annie went too far, the aud wld hate her and thus the film? #scriptchat
7:15 pm jeannevb: I apologize for not pimping MISERY wld be 1 wk early on EURO. Was in NYC this week & totally crazed. #scriptchat
7:15 pm jeannevb: @sweettweenie yes, join the crazy Americans w our sexy talk :) #scriptchat
7:16 pm LisaFromNYC: @DreamsGrafter I think the situation was horror enough & they didn't want to hurt the pro beyond repair. Too painful 4 audiences #ScriptChat
7:16 pm Mockwriter: @DreamsGrafter Seen the film, but, as of yet, haven't read the script. #scriptchat
7:17 pm jeannevb: fyi, article on @storydepth via @DreamsGrafter on the 1st page of MISERY http://tinyurl.com/2wbwla2 #scriptchat
7:18 pm DreamsGrafter: @Mockwriter You'll find the script interesting re choices made for film. #scriptchat - i.e. how far you can push your audience.
7:18 pm Sofluid: @DreamsGrafter #scriptchat I can see why they changed the pills from addiction to scheming - added more suspense to scenes with Annie...
7:19 pm Loglinecreator: Sept. contest now closed. Sharpen those loglines for Oct! http://bit.ly/9Njre7 #scriptchat #screenwriting
7:20 pm DreamsGrafter: @LisaFromNYC Totally and as @twatterer said, if the aud. hates Annie, they'll hate the film. #scriptchat
7:20 pm DreamsGrafter: RT @Sofluid: @DreamsGrafter #scriptchat I can see why they changed the pills from addiction to scheming - added more suspense to scenes with Annie...
7:20 pm Sofluid: @DreamsGrafter #scriptchat Can also appreciate y they changed amputation 2 breakage, as subsequent screenplay scenes then beggared belief...
7:21 pm rabbitandcrow: @DreamsGrafter I did. Annie is quite likeable in the movie vs. loathesome in the book. Misery is written as an entertainment. #scriptchat
7:21 pm DreamsGrafter: RT @Sofluid: @DreamsGrafter #scriptchat Can also appreciate y they changed amputation 2 breakage, as subsequent screenplay scenes then beggared belief...
7:21 pm Mockwriter: @DreamsGrafter The scene that makes the lasting impression is the "ankles." I don't think it was OTT, just enough #scriptchat #scriptchat
7:21 pm chained: RT @scriptchat: RT @jeannevb: FYI,EURO #scriptchat talks MISERY... USA chat talking sex scenes/profanity. Don't confuse MISERY w sex. #justsayin
7:22 pm Sofluid: @DreamsGrafter #scriptchat Appreciated the scenes diversifying with Paul being let out of the room on occassion... Tho took away intensity..
7:22 pm LisaFromNYC: If I recall, in the film the waitress (end) says "I'm ur biggest fan", right? Not in the script. #ScriptChat
7:23 pm Sofluid: @DreamsGrafter #scriptchat Definitely agreed with omitting VO, which for the most part I found confusing & distracting in screenplay...
7:24 pm DreamsGrafter: @rabbitandcrow I read tht they weren't even sure to do the breakage but they had to do something to create tht level of horror. #scriptchat
7:24 pm DreamsGrafter: RT @Sofluid: @DreamsGrafter #scriptchat Definitely agreed with omitting VO, which for the most part I found confusing & distracting in screenplay...
7:24 pm DreamsGrafter: RT @LisaFromNYC: If I recall, in the film the waitress (end) says "I'm ur biggest fan", right? Not in the script. #ScriptChat
7:24 pm LisaFromNYC: Sometimes the unseen is more powerful to our imagination. Movie: we hear crunch (power of sound) Script: we see blood #ScriptChat
7:25 pm chained: #scriptchat how much was script for misery sold for ? Or how much was writer paid to adapt the book ?
7:25 pm rabbitandcrow: Goldman's adaptation book goes into great detail about his process of adapting Misery. #scriptchat
7:26 pm LisaFromNYC: RT @Sofluid: @DreamsGrafter #scriptchat Definitely agreed with omitting VO, which for the most part I found confusing & distracting in screenplay...
7:27 pm DreamsGrafter: @LisaFromNYC Yes, the number one fan was added in the film. Thought that added to the horror of being a writer. ;) #scriptchat
7:27 pm jeannevb: @rabbitandcrow which book was that? I'll link it on blog #scriptchat
7:28 pm lizziside: RT @RichardDiaz: The trailer for my film Distortion was screened y/day at the SAC SciFi Horror Show http://youtu.be/d5ycn2jJQPg #scriptchat
7:28 pm DreamsGrafter: @rabbitandcrow Could you share what some of his processes might be. Need to read that book! #scriptchat
7:28 pm Sofluid: Added it to my wanted list! RT @rabbitandcrow: Goldman's adaptation book goes into detail about his process of adapting Misery. #scriptchat
7:30 pm LisaFromNYC: @DreamsGrafter I agree. I like that added line at the end. It's become classic #ScriptChat
7:30 pm DreamsGrafter: What about the use of flashback re Bell? Did that jolt you out of the story/suspense? #scriptchat
7:30 pm rabbitandcrow: @jeannevb I can't remember the title. Don't have Amazon in front of me. "More Adventures In The Screen Trade"? #scriptchat
7:32 pm jeannevb: @rabbitandcrow Adventures in Screen Trade http://tinyurl.com/28p6gv9 More Adventures in Screen Trade http://tinyurl.com/2cb7qcr #scriptchat
7:32 pm jeannevb: @rabbitandcrow will link both :) Thanks! #scriptchat
7:32 pm LisaFromNYC: @DreamsGrafter yes, the flashback did take me out. Momentarily confused #ScriptChat
7:32 pm DreamsGrafter: To continue fr @Sofluid's point, so glad Paul wasn't an addict in the film. Annie's hold over him wldn't have been as powerfu. #scriptchat
7:33 pm rabbitandcrow: Goldman goes thru source material multiple times, underlining the cinematic moments with a different colored pencil on each pass #scriptchat
7:33 pm emventker: RT @MishaPolonsky: RT @jolenejahnke @scriptchat @jeannevb: #scriptchat TOPIC SUNDAY: We're talking sex. Writing sex scenes & handling profanity.
7:34 pm DreamsGrafter: @LisaFromNYC Apart from voice over, how else cld we know about his life before the accident, do you think? #scriptchat
7:34 pm Sofluid: Agreed! RT @LisaFromNYC: @DreamsGrafter I agree. I like that added line at the end. It's become classic #ScriptChat
7:35 pm jeannevb: Both Goldman books now linked in our blog www.scriptchat.com #scriptchat
7:35 pm DreamsGrafter: Misery script has flashback and voice over: both no no's in the spec writing world. Did Goldman get away w/ it bc he was Goldman #scriptchat
7:36 pm DreamsGrafter: Or did either serve the story ideally? i.e. voice over was taken out in the film. #scriptchat
7:36 pm RaidPoint: @DreamsGrafter "What about the use of flashback re Bell? Did that jolt you out of the story/suspense?" was ok.served its purpose #scriptchat
7:36 pm DreamsGrafter: I must read. RT @rabbitandcrow: Goldman's adaptation book goes into great detail about his process of adapting Misery. #scriptchat
7:37 pm DreamsGrafter: @rabbitandcrow But didn't Reiner have a big say in adaptation. i.e. King wanted only Reiner to direct the move. #scriptchat
7:37 pm DreamsGrafter: RT @RaidPoint: @DreamsGrafter "What about the use of flashback re Bell? Did that jolt you out of the story/suspense?" was ok.served its purpose #scriptchat
7:38 pm RaidPoint: @DreamsGrafter not no-nos as such. just that newbies tend not to use them correctly. but if done well n add to the scene; ok #scriptchat
7:38 pm LisaFromNYC: I like flaws in pros, but addiction not nec. He needed 2 overcome what SHE was doing 2 him. His superstitions were enough flaw #ScriptChat
7:39 pm RaidPoint: @DreamsGrafter : major drawback was the script-style with the million camera directions. assume was per development notes. #scriptchat
7:39 pm DreamsGrafter: @LisaFromNYC Totally agree re Sheldon's addiction. #scriptchat
7:39 pm DreamsGrafter: RT @RaidPoint: @DreamsGrafter not no-nos as such. just that newbies tend not to use them correctly. but if done well n add to the scene; ok #scriptchat
7:39 pm Sofluid: #scriptchat I think too much happened in screenplay, too cluttered. Thought progression much tighter in film.
7:40 pm DreamsGrafter: @RaidPoint Good point! They did take the voice over out but the flashback was a clean way to intro back story: short 'n' sweet. #scriptchat
7:40 pm RaidPoint: @LisaFromNYC what superstitions? the writing ritual? #scriptchat
7:40 pm LisaFromNYC: Maybe if the flashback had a "1 week earlier". idk. For some reason I didn't realize it was a fb at 1st. #ScriptChat
7:41 pm DreamsGrafter: @Sofluid I agree. Sometimes the description was too dense. Pacing was lost. #scriptchat
7:41 pm chained: #scriptchat I think misery needed more humour , any script reads better with some humour in it
7:41 pm RaidPoint: @Sofluid actually prefer the script to the film. apart from the dead boring first 8-9 pgs, think it was well executed imho #scriptchat
7:41 pm LisaFromNYC: @RaidPoint Yes, the writing ritual of not making copies. He learned that lesson after his manu was burnt #ScriptChat
7:42 pm DreamsGrafter: Sign-posting the reader? RT @LisaFromNYC: Maybe if flashbk had a "1 week earlier". I didn't realize it was a fb at 1st. #ScriptChat
7:42 pm RaidPoint: @Sofluid but then its a personal taste thing. like scripts that are fluid and dont have 2 much lull #scriptchat
7:42 pm LisaFromNYC: There was a lot of passive voice. But I figured it was the style back then #ScriptChat
7:44 pm lizziside: All the best again from all of us at #scriptchat RT @aaron_skewediri: The #mystery begins in 20mins #westernx @WesternXTheShow
7:44 pm LisaFromNYC: @DreamsGrafter superposition. Maybe I was lost b/c I was adjusting to "cut to" at the onset lol #ScriptChat
7:44 pm DreamsGrafter: RT @LisaFromNYC: There was a lot of passive voice. But I figured it was the style back then #ScriptChat
7:45 pm RaidPoint: @LisaFromNYC true its a neg thing, but doesnt almost everyone have such weird spsttns? dont view as neg. but get ur point #scriptchat
7:45 pm DreamsGrafter: @LisaFromNYC That's so true re passive voice. I didn't pick up on it but at same time thought pace was lagging. #scriptchat
7:45 pm DreamsGrafter: RT @lizziside: All the best again from all of us at #scriptchat RT @aaron_skewediri: The #mystery begins in 20mins #westernx @WesternXTheShow
7:46 pm rabbitandcrow: @DreamsGrafter Also addiction wouldn't play well visually - especially for a character who lies in bed the whole movie. #scriptchat
7:47 pm RaidPoint: so did anyone also feel like dropping the script b4 hittin pg 10? was 2 annoying n boring b4 it picked up with a bang after pg 9 #scriptchat
7:48 pm RaidPoint: what I also really dig for the talents, is the fact that no specific xter descriptions were given. just general look #scriptchat
7:49 pm dramadj: @RaidPoint No, i think for character intr. it's kinda okay. Nod top-notch but okay. #scriptchat
7:49 pm DreamsGrafter: @rabbitandcrow So So true. Completely internal! #scriptchat
7:49 pm DreamsGrafter: RT @rabbitandcrow: @DreamsGrafter Also addiction wouldn't play well visually - especially for a character who lies in bed the whole movie. #scriptchat
7:49 pm rabbitandcrow: Misery reminds me how great Goldman's villains are - Szell, The Superposse, that Bad Guy from The Princess Bride #scriptchat
7:49 pm filmutopia: #scriptchat Sorry I'm late. Was watching Stalker with fiance. She'd never seen it.
7:50 pm DreamsGrafter: 10 more mins. on EURO #SCRIPTCHAT ... Get your last min. thoughts on MISERY across. :D
7:50 pm RaidPoint: we get that sheldon is not a youth, or annie isnt a beauty etc, but its wide open for the casting dirs. great for getting talent #scriptchat
7:50 pm LisaFromNYC: @DreamsGrafter passive voice bogged it down. much could've been cut. He cradles the manu>He is holding the manu like blah blah #ScriptChat
7:51 pm DreamsGrafter: @filmutopia Hi Clive, it seems like forever since our paths have crossed. We're talking Misery tonight. #scriptchat
7:51 pm DreamsGrafter: RT @rabbitandcrow: Misery reminds me how great Goldman's villains are - Szell, The Superposse, that Bad Guy from The Princess Bride #scriptchat
7:51 pm filmutopia: #scriptchat Misery? Not sex and bad language? Damn, I prepped for the wrong fucking topic! ha!
7:51 pm Sofluid: @RaidPoint #scriptchat I also prefer script - more intense/haunting. Script good but film made some necessary changes to make it work/appeal
7:51 pm janetvaneeden: RT @DreamsGrafter: Btw, I wrote an article on page of MISERY: http://bit.ly/8YPeAM Methinks it's quite perfect. #scriptchat
7:52 pm RaidPoint: @LisaFromNYC very true. thats why the first 9 pgs sucked. read very amateurish. #scriptchat
7:52 pm dramadj: @LisaFromNYC It's all very detailed, yes... kind of confused me, but this was 1989... #scriptchat
7:52 pm rabbitandcrow: @DreamsGrafter @LisaFromNYC Wonder if he's using passive voice to emphasise victimisation. #scriptchat
7:53 pm RaidPoint: @Sofluid true. just personally preferred the script cos not bound by the actors "acting". #scriptchat
7:53 pm LisaFromNYC: inters pt. idk RT @rabbitandcrow: @DreamsGrafter @LisaFromNYC Wonder if hes using passive voice to emphasise victimisation. #ScriptChat
7:53 pm DreamsGrafter: We'll make it clearer nxt time re EURO & US. Sorry! RT @filmutopia: #scriptchat Not sex & bad lang? Damn, I prepped for wrong fucking topic!
7:54 pm LisaFromNYC: RT @Sofluid: @RaidPoint #scriptchat I also prefer script - more intense/haunting. Script good but film made some necessary changes to make it work/appeal
7:55 pm filmutopia: #scriptchat - I've nothing useful to say about Misery. I am, however, a mine of info on profanity. I shall save it up for next time!
7:55 pm RaidPoint: @rabbitandcrow might be. but its against sw 101; show dont tell. was a bit too much telling. #scriptchat
7:55 pm DreamsGrafter: Do you think? RT @rabbitandcrow: @DreamsGrafter @LisaFromNYC Wonder if he's using passive voice to emphasise victimisation. #scriptchat
7:56 pm DreamsGrafter: RT @Sofluid: @RaidPoint #scriptchat I also prefer script - more intense/haunting. Script good but film made some necessary changes to make it work/appeal
7:56 pm RaidPoint: @filmutopia lol #scriptchat
7:56 pm lizziside: Ahah..same here! RT @filmutopia: #scriptchat Misery? Not sex and bad language? Damn, I prepped for the wrong fucking topic! ha!
7:56 pm DreamsGrafter: @janetvaneeden Thanks for RT Janet. Hope you had a lovely weekend! #scriptchat
7:57 pm filmutopia: @lizziside perhaps we could stand at the back of the class and mutter rude words! #scriptchat
7:57 pm LisaFromNYC: @filmutopia Kathy Bates doesn't like profanity. #ScriptChat
7:58 pm Sofluid: @RaidPoint #scriptchat Opening wasn't too bad, crash was exciting. Page 9 not too bad in a 135 pager - within first 10 per cent so passable
7:59 pm janetvaneeden: @DreamsGrafter Great thanks Mina. Sorry checking in so late but have 8 am deadline for tomorrow. YIKES! Far from there yet. :) #scriptchat
7:59 pm DreamsGrafter: Haha! RT @LisaFromNYC: @filmutopia Kathy Bates doesn't like profanity. #ScriptChat
8:00 pm RaidPoint: @Sofluid was ok. for such a "classic" was expecting more. I think just a jaded opinion. lol #scriptchat
8:00 pm DreamsGrafter: EURO #SCRIPTCHAT next week will have @livingspiritpix guesting and discussing low-budget screenwriting with us! Woo hoo!
8:00 pm dramadj: I just thought of real funeral services for maga characters in japan. It's kind of Misery becoming real. Who would've thought? #scriptchat
8:01 pm RaidPoint: @DreamsGrafter nice work :)! #scriptchat
8:02 pm LisaFromNYC: @RaidPoint Aside from the writing style, I felt it was very intense. It took me a few pgs 2 adjust & then I was sucked on #ScriptChat
8:02 pm janetvaneeden: RT @DreamsGrafter: EURO #SCRIPTCHAT next week will have @livingspiritpix guesting and discussing low-budget screenwriting with us! Woo hoo!
8:03 pm LisaFromNYC: @LisaFromNYC sucked "in"... excuse me lol #ScriptChat
8:03 pm Sofluid: @RaidPoint #scriptchat Never read book so can't compare. Found film dragged a bit, not sure if that's due to SK style or a sign of times...
8:03 pm OnewordTF: RT @LisaFromNYC: @RaidPoint Aside from the writing style, I felt it was very intense. It took me a few pgs 2 adjust & then I was sucked on #ScriptChat
8:03 pm DreamsGrafter: @filmutopia He is ... I really hope you can make it. Low-budget screenwriting is the topic. Right up your street! :) #scriptchat
8:04 pm RaidPoint: @LisaFromNYC yeah, loved the intensity. hate scripts where I keep lkn at the pg no and forcin myself 2 read. #scriptchat
8:06 pm DreamsGrafter: Thanks #scriptchat tweeps for your insightful thoughts on Misery! Have a great evening. :) xo
8:07 pm RaidPoint: @Sofluid not really a fan of the film either. actually prefer the script 2 the bk. imo pace is a bit due to the setting. #scriptchat
8:08 pm RaidPoint: @DreamsGrafter thank u. have a nc nite. :) #scriptchat
8:08 pm Sofluid: @RaidPoint #scriptchat Good point!
8:08 pm DreamsGrafter: @RaidPoint Thank you so much. I loved your points! x #scriptchat
8:09 pm Sofluid: #scriptchat Great chat guys, thanks! Night all!
8:09 pm DreamsGrafter: For those expecting profanity, #scriptchat will be riddled with it in a few hours. Hang on in there. It's gonna be fun!
USA CHAT: sex scenes and profanity…
jeannevb: It's #SCRIPTCHAT O'CLOCK... we're talking sex scenes and profanity. A most dangerous topic for us...
LauraVanVleet: RT @KageyNYC: Lowering the lights, sipping champagne, playing some Barry White. Now I'm ready for #scriptchat
GinySassenach: So funny !RT @UncompletedWork: oops just had a premature #scripchatulation #scriptchat
jeannevb: haha RT @eyamie: So I guess this would be the foreplay portion of #scriptchat. Too short, as always. #scriptchat
The_Jodi: #scriptchat Oooo la la!
12:01 am SharkGoddess: Ladies and Gentleman, I'll be in a meeting in #Scriptchat from 5- to 6pm. Fair warning!
12:01 am KageyNYC: This is already best #scriptchat ever. RT @UncompletedWork: oops just had a premature #scripchatulation #scriptchat
12:01 am jeannevb: first of all, welcome to our virgin chatters. U picked a HOT night to start! Bravo! #scriptchat
12:01 am eyamie: @UncompletedWork Milk is coming out of my nose. #scriptchat
12:01 am circlesoffire: @kageynyc I think it says something about me that I've got the chamomile tea out while y'all have your liquors. :) #scriptchat #scriptchat
12:01 am GinySassenach: Ok someone please who has written a sex scene tell us, #scriptchat
12:01 am michael2172: I am just excited tonight about sex chat as I was in 5th grade #scriptchat
12:01 am jeannevb: ok, so in #slaverybyanothername I didn't get to write any hot sex scenes, but I'm going to make up for it tonight #scriptchat
12:02 am KageyNYC: If you've never joined #scriptchat, tonight's the night RT @jeannevb: we're talking sex scenes & profanity. A most dangerous topic for us...
12:02 am jeannevb: I love you :) RT @michael2172: I am just excited tonight about sex chat as I was in 5th grade #scriptchat
12:02 am GinySassenach: LOL RT @michael2172: I am just excited tonight about sex chat as I was in 5th grade #scriptchat
12:02 am circlesoffire: @jeannevb Thanks for the welcome! Looking forward to the conversation. #scriptchat #scriptchat
12:02 am SissiePoohSOD: hello, everyone! :) #scriptchat
12:02 am circlesoffire: @jeannevb Thanks for the welcome! Looking forward to the conversation. #scriptchat
12:02 am yeah_write: @circlesoffire I'm drinking coffee. No brandy until sober September is done. #scriptchat
12:02 am art1032: ::Dies Laughing:: :)@eyamie @UncompletedWork Milk is coming out of my nose. #scriptchat
12:02 am TheWriteScript: I tend to leave both the sex and the profanity OUT of my scripts because it seems gratuitous. Sexual energy is good. #scriptchat
12:02 am jeannevb: she glides in next to him, hands quivering... oh wait... we're not writing are we? #scriptchat
12:03 am GinySassenach: @SissiePoohSOD Hello *waves* #scriptchat
12:03 am KageyNYC: @circlesoffire In some countries, tea is an aphrodisiac. #scriptchat
12:03 am SissiePoohSOD: :laughing loudly: #scriptchat
12:03 am yeah_write: On the profanity, I love it best when it comes from someone unexpected, like the well dressed socialite, or the grandma #scriptchat
12:03 am SissiePoohSOD: @GinySassenach: Hello! :) #scriptchat
12:03 am GinySassenach: RT @TheWriteScript: I tend to leave sex and the profanity OUT of my scripts because it seems gratuitous. Sexual energy is good. #scriptchat
12:03 am circlesoffire: @kageynyc It is in my household, that's for sure. #scriptchat
12:03 am GeneMarie1: She's excited! me too RT @jeannevb he glides in next to him, hands quivering... oh wait... we're not writing are we? #scriptchat #scriptchat
12:03 am covermyscript: you only say that RT @KageyNYC: Writing sex scenes -- perfect topic for readers to join. (you too, @covermyscript) #scriptchat
12:03 am dwacon: This is the WRONG party to be late to. Catching up - - drinking homemade V8 (apple,blueberry,blackberry,spinach,white tea) #scriptchat
12:04 am sam_gurney: The closest I've done to writing a sex scene was an exploding boob scene. That's hot, right? #scriptchat
12:04 am JohnMiewald: I think this topic is squarely all about knowing your target audience. #scriptchat
12:04 am jeannevb: @GeneMarie1 heehee :) #scriptchat
12:04 am tracinell: *waves* hi scriptchatters & #treefort gang! #scriptchat
12:04 am dizzydentfilms: Years ago, I got ths note from Slamdance coverage: "Anal sex on page 45. rlly?" I guess they weren't as edgy/indie as I thought. #scriptchat
12:04 am GinySassenach: I guess I never thought that the script writer had to go into detail for sex scene? #scriptchat
12:04 am covermyscript: 'cause you read my work @KageyNYC. ;-p #scriptchat
12:04 am jeannevb: So how do you all handle sex scenes? How hot do you get? #scriptchat
12:04 am GeneMarie1: @thewritescript...I think I can't wait to read your work! #scriptchat! #scriptchat
12:04 am blankethouse: @jeannevb you had me at hello! #scriptchat
12:04 am circlesoffire: I'm interested in the idea of the "gratuitous" when it comes to sex and profanity. #scriptchat
12:04 am SissiePoohSOD: on the rare times when I write profanity, I do my best to make sure it's appropriate. #scriptchat
12:04 am eyamie: Okay so first question: is a rom-com a good place for a bukkake scene? #scriptchat
12:04 am jeannevb: *grin* RT @sam_gurney: The closest Ive done to writing a sex scene was an exploding boob scene. Thats hot, right? #scriptchat
12:04 am SharkGoddess: I find it hard to write one without it reading cheesy.. #scriptchat
12:04 am circlesoffire: I think like most elements of a script, the sex and profanity have to be motivated, and help move the story along. #scriptchat
12:05 am readerproof: Profanity is often a must for realism. Sex scenes however usually aren't needed. #scriptchat
12:05 am eyamie: On a serious note - I hate using profanity and find something better whenever I can. #scriptchat
12:05 am KageyNYC: It needed more sex. :-P RT @covermyscript: 'cause you read my work @KageyNYC. ;-p #scriptchat
12:05 am GeneDoucette: #SCRIPTCHAT on the road, but let me say the first sign you're a new writer is the overuse of profanity.
12:05 am covermyscript: @eyamie i can't believe ou can spell bukkake. #scriptchat
12:05 am jtabergas: lol. interesting. RT @eyamie: Okay so first question: is a rom-com a good place for a bukkake scene? #scriptchat
12:05 am michael2172: Anyone know of a script with a good example of a well writing sex scene? #scriptchat
12:05 am DoubleNW: Hey #Scriptchat :) My biggest thing with sex scenes/cursing n movies has 2 do with teens. Not 2 4get about alcohol and drugs also.
12:06 am dwacon: I have a standard procedure: Follow the hastily removed trail of clothing to the bed where... #scriptchat
12:06 am yeah_write: Where is Laurell K Hamilton when you need her? Now she can write a sex scene. #scriptchat
12:06 am covermyscript: i wrote a super hot sex scene. (@KageyNYC) #scriptchat
12:06 am jeannevb: I admit while I love a good hot scene, I prefer the old movies where the sex is implied... kiss, screen goes dark. Imagination #scriptchat
12:06 am eyamie: @covermyscript I am a cunning linguist #scriptchat
12:06 am Samuraiko: @jeannevb I generally TRY to write them with a modicum of dignity. Hot, passionate, and intense, yes. But not debasing. #scriptchat
12:06 am jtabergas: I don't use profanity either. RT @eyamie: On a serious note - I hate using profanity and find something better whenever I can. #scriptchat
12:06 am covermyscript: there's more sex coming. ;-p RT @KageyNYC: It needed more sex. :-P RT @covermyscript: 'cause you read my work @KageyNYC. ;-p #scriptchat
12:06 am GeneMarie1: I have to say I enjoy tasteful sex scenes, where there's a connection w/out the feeling you're intruding...like porn #scriptchat #scriptchat
12:06 am marisabirns: Can't one write in script, "Sex happens now" and have actors/director figure it out? :D #scriptchat
12:06 am jeannevb: I'm zipping my lip :) RT @covermyscript: i wrote a super hot sex scene. (@KageyNYC) #scriptchat
12:06 am covermyscript: @jeannevb somewhere between that and porn is the answer. #scriptchat
12:06 am readerproof: @michael2172 They are very rare. I can't even think of one. #scriptchat
12:07 am TheWriteScript: I like to think I'm more creative than having to resort to the typical attention-getters. #scriptchat
12:07 am yeah_write: I've been married so long, I don't know what a super hot sex scene is. #scriptchat
12:07 am The_Jodi: Probably says something about me that I've mostly written comedic sex scenes :) #scriptchat
12:07 am GCGeek: It's all about the research. Trial & error. Experimentation. What's the subject ;-). Sorry I'm late! #scriptchat
12:07 am GinySassenach: Funny RT @covermyscript: @eyamie i cant believe ou can spell bukkake. #scriptchat
12:07 am dwacon: Instructors criticized my failure to include profanity. My highest rated script had a ton of it... but it works as well without #scriptchat
12:07 am GeneMarie1: @jeannevb Even better! Implied sex! #scriptchat ... a nice fade to black. #scriptchat
12:07 am KageyNYC: In WIP unexpected sex is inciting incident. Want to include some description, hint at hotness the char's exp, but not overdo it. #scriptchat
12:07 am readerproof: @jeannevb Or cutting to a train going into a tunnel, lol #scriptchat
12:07 am circlesoffire: @marisabirns As someone who works on set, let me be the first to tell you, without equivocation, NO. ;) #scriptchat
12:07 am yeah_write: Yeah, can't one? RT @marisabirns: Cant one write in script, "Sex happens now" and have actors/director figure it out? :D #scriptchat
12:07 am jeannevb: ROFLMAO RT @yeah_write: Ive been married so long, I dont know what a super hot sex scene is. #scriptchat
12:07 am SissiePoohSOD: I want the sex scene I write to be erotic, but I don't want it to turn into porn, either. #scriptchat
12:07 am omewan: @jeannevb seperate beds too? ;-) #scriptchat
12:07 am jeannevb: ohhh.... that too :) RT @readerproof: @jeannevb Or cutting to a train going into a tunnel, lol #scriptchat
12:07 am SharkGoddess: @yeah_write Same here. lol #scriptchat
12:08 am TheWriteScript: Problem is, one the sex act happens, you lose the sexual energy...so much work to build up again. #scriptchat
12:08 am KageyNYC: @covermyscript And this new avatar of yours... hello, sex! I love it! #scriptchat
12:08 am cinekink: Ah... they're talking about writing sex scenes over at #scriptchat.
12:08 am UncompletedWork: I don't generally use FUCK in the action text. If I do it's for significant impact, me thinks. #Scriptchat
12:08 am jeannevb: no, no, NO! ;) RT @omewan: @jeannevb seperate beds too? ;-) #scriptchat
12:08 am jtabergas: I have never written sex scenes, well mostly because I write scripts for children. That's gotta be awkward. #scriptchat
12:08 am covermyscript: oh! you never read it. just kim. she's special! RT @jeannevb: zipping my lip :) RT xandy: wrote super hot sex scene. (@KageyNYC) #scriptchat
12:08 am yeah_write: @circlesoffire So as someone who works on a set, how would you like the scene written? #scriptchat
12:08 am jfinley: RT @jeannevb: ROFLMAO RT @yeah_write: Ive been married so long, I dont know what a super hot sex scene is. #scriptchat
12:08 am Samuraiko: @jeannevb Actually, the best compliment I got for my sex scenes is 'deliciously scandalous.' Not too outrageous, but oh my! #scriptchat
12:08 am mdaystory: @michael2172 Most scripts i've read don't delve into detail w. sex scenes. 1 or 2 lines of big print. Crew & actors do the rest. #scriptchat
12:08 am jeannevb: join us! RT @cinekink: Ah... theyre talking about writing sex scenes over at #scriptchat. #scriptchat
12:08 am UncompletedWork: Hey now! ;-) RT @KageyNYC: @covermyscript And this new avatar of yours... hello, sex! I love it! #scriptchat
12:08 am covermyscript: it's all my guyRT @KageyNYC: And this new avatar of yours... hello, sex! I love it! #scriptchat
12:08 am tracinell: agree. RT @TheWriteScript: Problem is, one the sex act happens, you lose the sexual energy...so much work to build up again. #scriptchat
12:08 am GinySassenach: @DoubleNW But in England the it's natural to say the F word, etc. so many teens are cursing casually all the time. #scriptchat
12:08 am jeannevb: hee RT @jtabergas: I have never written sex scenes, well mostly because I write scripts for children. Thats gotta be awkward. #scriptchat
12:08 am GCGeek: In all seriousness, it's all cerebral. Imagination, implication. How you tell the story and letting the viewer connect & imagine #scriptchat
12:08 am circlesoffire: Aren't all sex scenes, certainly outside the hardcore world (but also there, too), at least partially implied? #scriptchat
12:09 am GeneDoucette: #SCRIPTCHAT profanity is like salt. You can add it later, but it's hard to take it away once too much has been used
12:09 am blankethouse: @circlesoffire my last script I have a you couple making out, but that's about it, it moves the story along well #scriptchat
12:09 am Samuraiko: @The_Jodi When you think about it, sex is an inherently hilarious act - awkward, messy, hair everywhere, and surreal. #scriptchat
12:09 am mamajalapa: I was complimented on my sex scene for being realistic.(despite stressing over every. Single. Word) #scriptchat
12:09 am Timsn: Very true RT @TheWriteScript: Problem is, one the sex act happens, you lose the sexual energy...so much work to build up again. #scriptchat
12:09 am GeneMarie1: At times yes...True RT @readerproof: Profanity is often a must for realism. Sex scenes however usually arent needed. #scriptchat
12:09 am yeah_write: Now there's a romantic comedy, trying to heat up the sex in a 20 year old marriage. Hangover meets Golden Girls. #scriptchat
12:09 am The_Jodi: Going above my computer! :) RT@covermyscript: @jeannevb somewhere between that and porn is the answer. #scriptchat
12:09 am TheWriteScript: We're all going to get new followers after tonight for all the wrong reasons. #scriptchat
12:09 am SharkGoddess: How do you show the audience the difference bewteen a passionate sex scene and a angry sex scene ? #scriptchat
12:09 am circlesoffire: The way that sex on screen always falls short of our expectations is part of the challenge. #scriptchat
12:09 am dizzydentfilms: I'm straight, but the sex scenes in Mulholland Drive are pretty...striking. #scriptchat
12:09 am tracinell: RT @GCGeek:Imagination, implication. How you tell the story and letting the viewer connect & imagine #scriptchat
12:09 am amgamble: RT @jeannevb: join us! RT @cinekink: Ah... theyre talking about writing sex scenes over at #scriptchat. #scriptchat
12:09 am jeannevb: I'd rather watch a great sexual-chemistry banter than a full blown f*cking scene #scriptchat
12:09 am dwacon: My meeting at Overbrook was with two women who ignored 108 pages and focused on the 2 pages of secks. Weird energy in the room. #scriptchat
12:09 am sharlascroggs: LOL RT @marisabirns: Can't one write in script, "Sex happens now" and have actors/director figure it out? :D #scriptchat
12:09 am tracinell: Ha! RT @TheWriteScript: Were all going to get new followers after tonight for all the wrong reasons. #scriptchat
12:09 am covermyscript: so my dad says "OMG HOT! this is incredible) re sex scene. #scriptchat
12:09 am SissiePoohSOD: you also lose that sexual tension, which can be just as erotic, if it's done right. #scriptchat
12:10 am GinySassenach: I meant English movies, not English everyday people. #scriptchat
12:10 am dizzydentfilms: @readerproof Body Heat #scriptchat
12:10 am writeononline: @Jeannevb. Wow #scriptchat what did I walk into?
12:10 am tracinell: truth. RT @jeannevb: Id rather watch a great sexual-chemistry banter than a full blown f*cking scene #scriptchat
12:10 am UncompletedWork: RT @art1032: ::Dies Laughing:: :)@eyamie @UncompletedWork Milk is coming out of my nose. #scriptchat [oops! Good I already have a towel!]
12:10 am blankethouse: @circlesoffire *young* couple #scriptchat sorry
12:10 am GeneMarie1: I hate and I rarely use profanity...only if it's truly necessary due to the character I have...I find it's abused for 'coolness' #scriptchat
12:10 am yeah_write: Absolutely. RT @jeannevb: Id rather watch a great sexual-chemistry banter than a full blown f*cking scene #scriptchat
12:10 am jeannevb: #scriptchat RT @Coord38N27W: The camera on the wedding ring that slips from a finger... RT @jeannevb I prefer the old movies...
12:10 am covermyscript: my step-mom asks, "is it uncomfortable for a parent to read something like that that THEIR child wrote?" #scriptchat
12:10 am circlesoffire: My preference too. RT @jeannevb: Id rather watch a great sexual-chemistry banter than a full blown f*cking scene #scriptchat
12:10 am jtabergas: How do you even write a kissing scene w/o it being cheesy? #scriptchat
12:10 am TenaciousTanaka: Dropping in to say hello. Elements should go into a story only if needed. Especially sex/violence #scriptchat
12:10 am DavidLNewhoff: Brando taking Eva Marie Saint's glove in "On the Waterfront" is a sex scene, which something very different from titillation. #scriptchat
12:10 am Samuraiko: Oh hell YES! RT @jeannevb I'd rather watch a great sexual-chemistry banter than a full blown f*cking scene #scriptchat
12:10 am HoodedMan: @SissiePoohSOD then make it erotic, in your eyes, and not porn... #scriptchat
12:10 am jeannevb: that's what she said ;) RT @writeononline: @Jeannevb. Wow #scriptchat what did I walk into? #scriptchat
12:11 am covermyscript: i bet it's the same as parents going to see their actor children in a sex scene, weird, but eventually you separate the work. #scriptchat
12:11 am GeneMarie1: Amen RT @tracinell: truth. RT @jeannevb: Id rather watch a great sexual-chemistry banter than a full blown f*cking scene #scriptchat
12:11 am SharkGoddess: @dwacon How many people do in the real world, don't use profanity ? #Scriptchat
12:11 am Teresa623: @SharkGoddess I would say by using expression on the character's faces. #scriptchat
12:11 am XanxiuZ: ZOMG, U 2 are out of control. RT @eyamie Okay so 1st question: is a rom-com a good place for a bukkake scene? #scriptchat cc: @covermyscript
12:11 am KageyNYC: Interested in what readers think of sex in scripts, any details in scripts are for readers. Directors handle job for viewers. #scriptchat
12:11 am The_Jodi: @Samuraiko I know it's been my experience! #ahem #scriptchat
12:11 am eyamie: @DavidLNewhoff Ya I miss the days when the sex was codified. #scriptchat
12:11 am covermyscript: they're so hot. english peple. RT @GinySassenach: I meant English movies, not English everyday people. #scriptchat
12:11 am GinySassenach: Agree RT @jeannevb: Id rather watch a great sexual-chemistry banter than a full blown f*cking scene #scriptchat
12:11 am readerproof: Sex scenes can come off as amaturish to the reader. #scriptchat
12:11 am KageyNYC: Love him too. RT @covermyscript: it's all my guyRT @KageyNYC: And this new avatar of yours... hello, sex! I love it! #scriptchat
12:11 am dizzydentfilms: @jeannevb Notorious. Four second kisses. #scriptchat
12:11 am Timsn: Anyone have the screenplay for Last Tango in Paris? #scriptchat
12:11 am dwacon: @SharkGoddess Depends on where you are. You might hear it in an alley but not in the abbey. #scriptchat
12:11 am readerproof: @dizzydentfilms I might have to read that one #scriptchat
12:12 am DoubleNW: 2 many movies have teens or actors playing teens doing way 2 many adult things. #scriptchat
12:12 am michael2172: I am currently writing a vampire spec script and think it should be more erotic and not full sex anyone agree? #scriptchat
12:12 am circlesoffire: @jeannevb And..I do think there's room for explicit screen depictions of sex. I'm not throwing the baby out with the bathwater. #scriptchat
12:12 am tracinell: tips on how "not to?"RT @readerproof: Sex scenes can come off as amaturish to the reader. #scriptchat
12:12 am KageyNYC: How do you like them handled? RT @readerproof: Sex scenes can come off as amaturish to the reader. #scriptchat
12:12 am DavidLNewhoff: @eyamie Not codified. That's real sexual tension, which means real screen drama. #scriptchat
12:12 am GinySassenach: In The Single Man - Colin Firth had firtatious encounter with male, It was hot b/c you didn't see kissing and etc.. #scriptchat
12:12 am Samuraiko: Okay, #scriptchat folks, anyone ever tried to write a superhero sex scene? I have to write one and it's proving... difficult.
12:12 am jeannevb: @DavidLNewhoff yeah! You made it! Stop writing and get back here... #scriptchat
12:12 am yeah_write: If @robluketic is on Twitter, maybe he can chime in here. How would he expect the scene to be written? #scriptchat
12:12 am CtKscribe: I'm here @jeannevb for another 20mins, will add to #ScriptChat since sex scenes & profanity intrigue me, somewhat.
12:12 am mdaystory: I think best sex scenes lay in hands of director & editor - found in the cut. Writer in this case, just covers blue print. #scriptchat
12:12 am Samuraiko: Mainly because I don't want it to be "Man of Steel, Woman of Tissue Paper" - that's just so... ugh. #scriptchat
12:12 am covermyscript: @KageyNYC oh shane black, he never wrote sex scenes. #scriptchat. he wrote stuff like:
12:12 am SharkGoddess: @Teresa623 That would be the obvious answer, but I was afraid it wouldn't register in the dark. #scriptchat
12:12 am LauraVanVleet: RT @michael2172: Anyone know of a script with a good example of a well writing sex scene? - Body Heat #scriptchat
12:13 am RexSikesMovieBt: RT @KageyNYC: Atta girl! RT @circlesoffire: Somehow it seems appropriate that my 1st #scriptchat is going 2 B the sex n cussin' #scriptchat
12:13 am covermyscript: "they have sex. i'm not gonna bother telling you what they do. i'm just gonna let the director figure it out. cut to: int..." #scriptchat
12:13 am dwacon: Lenny Bruce used profanity like a paint brush. Def Jam Comedy uses it like a bucket of paint tossed on the wall. #scriptchat
12:13 am scripteach: Is this #scriptchat or an intimacy webinar? RT @jeannevb: she glides in next to him, hands quivering... #scriptchat
12:13 am circlesoffire: @Samuraiko Huh. I think you have to take it away from the super powers and towards the human anxiety. #scriptchat
12:13 am joshey: @KageyNYC you mean the rough vs gentle debate hits #scriptchat too? ;)
12:13 am jeannevb: @CtKscribe woot! FYI, everyone, it's @CtKscribe's BIRTHDAY! How fitting we're talking sexy hotness ;) #scriptchat
12:13 am TenaciousTanaka: *hiding my porn collection* heh RT @jeannevb: Id rather watch a great sexual-chemistry banter than a full blown f*cking scene #scriptchat
12:13 am michael2172: @LauraVanVleet thanks #scriptchat
12:13 am TiltTheMovie: That can work. RT @mdaystory: Best sex scenes lay in hands of director & editor. Writer just covers blue print. #scriptchat
12:13 am Samuraiko: @LauraVanVleet @michael2172 I second the motion for "Body Heat." #scriptchat
12:13 am CtKscribe: Sex scenes, have sex 1st B4 writing them. Profanity, it works, but euphemism reigns. However Jon Stewart hasn't learned that yet #ScriptChat
12:13 am circlesoffire: @Samuraiko Lots of people worry about hurting their partners, or being hurt by their partners. Make it human. #scriptchat
12:14 am readerproof: @KageyNYC They're handled best with a simple: "Joe and Jane have sex". Something simple without many details. #scriptchat
12:14 am SpinMyNovel: RT @GeneDoucette: #SCRIPTCHAT profanity is like salt. You can add it later, but it's hard to take it away once too much has been used
12:14 am JohnMiewald: Avoiding sex and profanity is amateurish. Didn't the dude get a handjob on Episode 1 of Breaking Bad? That's not even HBO. #scriptchat
12:14 am chained: The crap film #swordfish had most stupid sex act ever In it when man forced to receive blowjob while computer hacking ! #scriptchat
12:14 am jeannevb: @scripteach both :) #scriptchat
12:14 am SharkGoddess: @dwacon That's true. #scriptchat
12:14 am dwacon: A realistic secks seen will include the words, ?Ow... you?re on my hair!? But only if it is a Judd Apatow production. #scriptchat
12:14 am GinySassenach: Yes RT @Samuraiko: @LauraVanVleet @michael2172 I second the motion for "Body Heat." #scriptchat
12:14 am circlesoffire: RT @GeneDoucette profanity is like salt. You can add it later, but its hard to take it away once too much has been used #scriptchat
12:14 am jtabergas: I will definitely follow this advice. :P RT @CtKscribe: Sex scenes, have sex 1st B4 writing them. #scriptchat
12:14 am eyamie: @Samuraiko Superhero sex scene?? lol What are the superpowers involved, I'm dying to know! (hoping it's Plastic Man) #scriptchat
12:15 am TheSarahBellum: @jeannevb Same here. Remember the sex scene btwn Don Sutherland and Julie Christie in 'Don't Look Now'? Kinda gross! #scriptchat
12:15 am Samuraiko: @circlesoffire Mmmm, true. Definitely a case (ironically) of him being hurt by her. Thank you! :) #scriptchat
12:15 am GCGeek: The 12-year-old (and class clown) is SCREAMING inside me right now, but this really is a great subject. #scriptchat
12:15 am The_Jodi: Anyone know of scripts with good sex scenes? Y'know for "research purposes!" #scriptchat #vavavoom
12:15 am kingisafink: Sex scenes should be held to the same standards as other scenes - they should serve the story or enhance character development. #scriptchat
12:15 am jeannevb: personally, I have a trucker mouth, but I can't stand it when films use F bomb constantly w/o purpose #scriptchat
12:15 am scripteach: HISTORY OF VIOLENCE had interesting sex scene: rough & raw on stairs. Gave hint of Protagonist's secret past & wive's acceptance #ScriptChat
12:15 am mdaystory: Tina has arrived. Yes! RT @ctkscribe Sex scenes, have sex 1st B4 writing them. Profanity, it works, but euphemism reigns... #scriptchat
12:15 am dwacon: @michael2172 The Dracula films (vice the Nosferatu film) used biting the neck as a metaphor for intercourse. #scriptchat
12:15 am dizzydentfilms: The sex is Catherine Breillat films is very effective. But it's integral to her stories. #scriptchat
12:15 am SharkGoddess: BINGO! RT @GeneDoucett #SCRIPTCHAT profanity is like salt.You can add it later, but it's hard to take it away once too much has been used
12:15 am marisabirns: @scripteach Ah, you're here. Great. Now you can let us in #scriptchat know all about writing sex scenes. #TakesOutPenAndPaper
12:15 am tracinell: suddenly my lurking feels more like voyeurism! ;) #scriptchat
12:15 am covermyscript: fuck you. RT @jeannevb: personally, I have a trucker mouth, but I can't stand it when films use F bomb constantly w/o purpose #scriptchat
12:15 am MireilleM: @TiltTheMovie RE: Best sex scenes lay in hands of director & editor. Writer just covers blue print. #scriptchat - What about the actors???
12:15 am KageyNYC: I mean in vs out. In terms of details, you perv! ;-P RT @joshey: @KageyNYC you mean the rough vs gentle debate hits #scriptchat too? ;)
12:15 am covermyscript: @jeannevb <3 #scriptchat
12:15 am Samuraiko: @eyamie One couple is a guy who controls/generates anti-matter/energy and a woman who's telekinetic and can control gravity... #scriptchat
12:16 am circlesoffire: I personally love the sex scenes in #Code46 -- motivated, critical, serving the plot and character development. And hot. #scriptchat
12:16 am obscuredrapture: I don't write scripts but the people on #scriptchat have some interesting points. Thanks @SharkGoddess for leading me there.
12:16 am David_Fulde: RT @kingisafink: Sex scenes should be held to the same standards as other scenes - they should serve the story or enhance character development. #scriptchat
12:16 am jeannevb: *slap* RT @covermyscript: fuck you. RT @jeannevb: I have a trucker mouth, but I cant stand it when films use F bomb constantly #scriptchat
12:16 am lizziside: Sex should be there for a purpose, like any other element, to to push the story forward and not just for the box-office #scriptchat
12:16 am chrisilluminati: From what I've seen of #scriptchat tonight they must all be writing the next great porn movie
12:16 am GeneMarie1: Well Said...RT @kingisafink: ...held to the same standards as other scenes...serve the story or enhance character development. #scriptchat
12:16 am Samuraiko: @eyamie ... the other is an electricity-slinging speedster and an immortal shadow-controlling psychic. Am I weird or what? #scriptchat
12:16 am dwacon: @eyamie If it was Superman, he'd be patching the hole in the top of Lois? skull... #scriptchat
12:16 am SissiePoohSOD: I can't stand bad language being used for the sake of bad language. #scriptchat
12:16 am TheWriteScript: @GeneMarie1 I want you to SEE my work. Soon! #scriptchat
12:16 am circlesoffire: I haven't read the #Code46 script though, so I'd be curious to know how it was written. #scriptchat
12:16 am jeannevb: @covermyscript ur killing me tonight :) #scriptchat
12:16 am DoubleNW: @GinySassenach U r mos def right about that but @ times I feel so uncomfortable when watching a movie with my teen bros. #scriptchat
12:16 am GCGeek: I think finding a unique way to convey intimacy, passion, love vs. raw lust/cliche scenes is true art #scriptchat
12:16 am jtabergas: How detailed can you get with sex scenes? Can you just put in the script they're having sex & have director expound on it? #scriptchat
12:17 am readerproof: If you sex scene is longer than a paragraph, it's probably too long. You risk ofending the reader (unless it moves the story) #scriptchat
12:17 am jeannevb: like u havent ;)RT @chrisilluminati: Fr what Ive seen of #scriptchat tonight they must all be writing the next great porn movie #scriptchat
12:17 am GeneMarie1: It bores me. I can't pay attention. RT @SissiePoohSOD: I cant stand bad language being used for the sake of bad language. #scriptchat
12:17 am eyamie: Word RT @kingisafink: Sex scenes should be held to the same standards - should serve the story /enhance character development. #scriptchat
12:17 am GCGeek: RT @lizziside: Sex should be there for a purpose, like any other element, to to push story forward & not just for the box-office #scriptchat
12:17 am yeah_write: @jeannevb and @covermyscript going at it right here in the chat. lol #scriptchat
12:17 am GeneMarie1: Even better! can't wait! RT @TheWriteScript: @GeneMarie1 I want you to SEE my work. Soon! #scriptchat
12:17 am IceNinjaSquad: The sex scene can't be random or cheesy either like in Watchmen. Sorry, just butting into #scriptchat
12:17 am michael2172: @HunkyBlueeyes no but i will look at it thank you #scriptchat
12:17 am zacsanford: How am I missing #scriptchat about sex scenes? Better find that amazing pitch at this pitch summit!!!
12:17 am tracinell: good to knowRT @readerproof: If you sex scene is longer than a paragraph, its probably too long. You risk offending... #scriptchat
12:17 am mamajalapa: RT @mdaystory: Tina has arrived. Yes! RT @ctkscribe Sex scenes, have sex 1st B4 writing them. Profanity, it works, but euphemism reigns... #scriptchat
12:17 am dwacon: In the morality of cinema, the one who instigates sex dies. Like Katie Cassidy in ?Taken? or the Jason/Freddy teens... #scriptchat
12:17 am Shanipedia: @yeah_write Shane Black usually writes something like "Sex Scene here. Figure it out. My Mom reads my scripts." #scriptchat
12:18 am UncompletedWork: I'll just leave this here -- Shit / Piss /Fuck / Cunt / Cocksucker / Motherfucker / Tits #scriptchat
12:18 am writeononline: RT @GCGeek: I think finding a unique way to convey intimacy, passion, love vs. raw lust/cliche scenes is true art #scriptchat
12:18 am yeah_write: Personally, I like the tension. Romance is cool, but I'd rather see raw sexual tension, since I have none in my life. lol #scriptchat
12:18 am circlesoffire: The sex scenes in #Watchmen were either incredibly offensive (the rape scene) or boring and unmotivated. A waste of time. #scriptchat
12:18 am cinekink: MT @kingisafink Sex scenes should be held to the same standards as others ..serve the story or enhance character development. #scriptchat
12:18 am jeannevb: @zacsanford we miss you! #scriptchat
12:18 am Samuraiko: Nope, just some good ole' superhero erotica. :) RT @chrisilluminati: they must be writing the next great porn movie #scriptchat
12:18 am LauraVanVleet: It's not always about sex, as much as characters in some kind of tension- anxiety- vulnerability- rage #scriptchat
12:18 am GinySassenach: Ok going so fast I cant read.... #scriptchat
12:18 am jeannevb: fyi, in case you're wondering, there are no orgies in the #treefort #scriptchat
12:18 am UncompletedWork: And yes -- my business card does say one of the seven dirty words. #RIP #Carlin #scriptchat
12:18 am swillmag: @jeannevb I used to work in the freight industry, and even I don't have a trucker mouth. Agree with your point, though. #scriptchat
12:18 am eyamie: @Samuraiko might I suggest that lords of antimatter and gravity might be a little kinky? (no need for the grownup jolly jumper) #scriptchat
12:18 am TheWriteScript: My arc for the TV pilot is basically no sex. Ever. If my main character has sex, uh, that's the final episode. LOL #scriptchat
12:18 am readerproof: @UncompletedWork I never got why "piss" was in the 7 #scriptchat
12:18 am KageyNYC: Mr Carlin, we miss you. RT @UncompletedWork I'll leave this here - Shit / Piss /Fuck / Cunt / Cocksucker / Motherfucker / Tits #scriptchat
12:19 am joda07: Ok peeps. Script chat time. Search: #scriptchat #writing
12:19 am KimBergie: **I agree with X.** RT @covermyscript: @jeannevb somewhere between that and porn is the answer. #scriptchat
12:19 am CtKscribe: For some bizarre reason writers are oblivious to the greatness of Euphemism. It's much FUNNIER and can be WAY dirtier. #ScriptChat
12:19 am mdaystory: @MireilleM yes, actors - of course. no chemistry, no sex scene. ;-)) #scriptchat
12:19 am tracinell: RT @LauraVanVleet: Its not always about sex, as much as characters in some kind of tension- anxiety- vulnerability- rage #scriptchat
12:19 am GinySassenach: The *idea* light just went over my head in respect to writing scripts...Duh #scriptchat
12:19 am circlesoffire: I honestly think it's irresponsible for the writer to just say {insert sex scene here} and make others figure it out. #scriptchat
12:19 am covermyscript: i'm taking you out alexis carrington style, bitch... with kisses. RT @jeannevb: @covermyscript ur killing me tonight :) #scriptchat
12:19 am dwacon: @zacsanford Here is a pitch. ?Taken? meets ?Green Acres? #scriptchat
12:19 am art1032: Absolutely :)@GCGeek I think finding a unique way to convey intimacy, passion, love vs. raw lust/cliche scenes is true art #scriptchat
12:19 am walterhzownself: @jtabergas You need to ensure that the sex scene drives the story forward as far as characterization, background, conflict, etc #scriptchat
12:19 am yeah_write: I HATE when 2 char get are in a life threatening situation and decide, "oh, we should make love." Unrealistic. #scriptchat
12:19 am GCGeek: @yeah_write Sexual tension is another great form of conflict. And in TV, continuing it/almost breaching but not consummating #scriptchat
12:19 am jeannevb: @swillmag I find it really distracting when it's "F this, F that" UNLESS it's really important to that character's profile #scriptchat
12:19 am scripteach: I think writing sex scenes is like writing action scenes: don't choreograph every move, but give important points & overview... #ScriptChat
12:19 am circlesoffire: If you don't know what happens over the course of the sex scene that matters for your story then why did you include it? #scriptchat
12:19 am eyamie: RT @GCGeek: I think finding a unique way to convey intimacy, passion, love vs. raw lust/cliche scenes is true art #scriptchat
12:19 am blankethouse: @lizziside but the box office would be nice too! :-) how u doen? Lol #scriptchat
12:20 am TheWriteScript: @yeah_write That's a soap opera. LOL #scriptchat
12:20 am scripteach: ...and let it have a point that impacts the characters and story. #ScriptChat
12:20 am dizzydentfilms: I'd like to read the Banderas/Rohmin sex scene in Femme Fatale. I wonder how detailed they got. #scriptchat
12:20 am eyamie: Hey speak of sexual tension, anyone see Nights In Rodanthe?? ha ha ha #scriptchat
12:20 am kingisafink: Right on! RT @Hollywood_Trey: @kingisafink even further, sex scenes, like any other scene, should push forward theme. #scriptchat
12:20 am dwacon: @ZacSanford -- Mr. Douglas has 72 hours before Arnold becomes a platter of baby back ribs... #scriptchat
12:20 am GeneMarie1: RT @yeah_write: I HATE when 2 char get are in a life threatening situation and decide, "oh, we should make love." Unrealistic. #scriptchat
12:20 am michael2172: RT @yeah_write: I HATE when 2 char get are in a life threatening situation and decide, "oh, we should make love." (AMEN) #scriptchat
12:20 am jeannevb: I read some sex scenes @Bekemeyer wrote & had hot flashes for days... damn #scriptchat
12:20 am authorViviAnna: love writing sex scenes...I find them really easy #scriptchat but probably because of my erotic romance novel writing background
12:20 am walterhzownself: @yeah_write tension is a key element in a sex scene or any scene in the screenplay. #scriptchat #screenwriting
12:20 am KageyNYC: I'm going on record: I have no problems w movie sex or profanity. I just take issue w shitty writing. #scriptchat
12:20 am UncompletedWork: Carlin's perspective on profanity most close to how I feel about profanity in comedy. #Scriptchat (actually it is how I feel!)
12:20 am SharkGoddess: What's off limits for sex scenes for adults onTV? #scriptchat
12:20 am yourgirlnxtdoor: @jeannevb I know this is gonna be a stupid question, but what is #scriptchat ?
12:20 am SissiePoohSOD: And what about the sex scene in Don't Look Now? That must have been interesting. #scriptchat
12:20 am covermyscript: it's because you are undoubtedly wild in the sack. RT @authorViviAnna: love writing sex scenes...I find them really easy #scriptchat
12:21 am dianewms: Are the MP rating guidelines out there? I want my historic feature to be PG13 but also a movie adults will enjoy. #scriptchat
12:21 am GinySassenach: The Postman rings twice - #scriptchat
12:21 am art1032: RT @scripteach: I think writing sex scenes is like writing action scenes: don't choreograph every move, but give important points & overview... #ScriptChat
12:21 am UncompletedWork: RT @scripteach: I think writing sex scenes is like writing action scenes: don't choreograph every move, but give important points & overview... #ScriptChat
12:21 am circlesoffire: Right on. RT @KageyNYC: Im going on record: I have no problems w movie sex or profanity. I just take issue w shitty writing. #scriptchat
12:21 am blankethouse: @eyamie @GCGeek and that's what we do, art! Make it so Obi Won or whatever his name is #scriptchat
12:21 am readerproof: I do wish I got more G-rated specs to read. Everything I seem to read is R rated. #scriptchat
12:21 am GCGeek: And sexual tension or social awkwardness is great for comedy-diner scene When Harry Met Sally, Jamie Lee's dance in True Lies... #scriptchat
12:21 am walterhzownself: RT @circlesoffire: If you don't know what happens over the course of the sex scene that matters for your story then why did you include it? #scriptchat
12:21 am Todfilm: Hey guys. Sorry I'm late for all the fucking. #scriptchat
12:21 am productionkat: oh my what to do raise money or look over scripts? #film #producers #scriptchat
12:21 am jeannevb: @yourgirlnxtdoor yeah, you're alive! :) It's a weekly chat for screenwriters. Tonight we're talking sex scenes *giggle* #scriptchat
12:21 am DoubleNW: I just feel some teen movies go a little 2 far... #scriptchat
12:21 am TheWriteScript: @yourgirlnxtdoor Don't worry...lots of people are wondering that tonight! #scriptchat
12:21 am SharkGoddess: RT @dwacon In the morality of cinema, the one who instigates sex dies.Like Katie Cassidy in ?Taken? or the Jason/Freddy teens.. #scriptchat
12:21 am lizziside: 'course, but you gotta blend it in nicely ;-) RT @blankethouse: but the box office would be nice too! :-) how u doen? Lol #scriptchat
12:21 am michael2172: Anyone ever read the scrip Lie With Me? I saw the film and it had lots of sex #scriptchat
12:21 am Samuraiko: @eyamie Except they are two of the most geeky science-types you could imagine. My fans call their relationship "nerd flirting." #scriptchat
12:21 am dwacon: @jeannevb I will have to get you some pages. And, some dry ice... #scriptchat
12:21 am jeannevb: I'll work on that for you :)RT @readerproof: I do wish I got more G-rated specs to read. Everything I seem to read is R rated. #scriptchat
12:22 am Timsn: Anyone read the script for Black Swan? #scriptchat
12:22 am The_Jodi: Agreed!@circlesoffire: The sex scenes in #Watchmen were either incredibly offensive ...or boring and unmotivated. waste of time. #scriptchat
12:22 am chained: I rented a DVD called bigjuggs once but it turned out to be about Egyptian pottery , I was so disappointed ! #scriptchat
12:22 am GinySassenach: You are too cool RT @Todfilm: Hey guys. Sorry Im late for all the fucking. #scriptchat
12:22 am scripteach: Bingo! RT @kingisafink: Sex scenes should be held to same standards as other scenes-serve story or enhance character development #scriptchat
12:22 am SissiePoohSOD: @oldiesmike: LOL... I'm doing a #scriptchat seminar about how to write sex scenes & profanity w/o feeling stupid.
12:22 am covermyscript: all my fucking and sucking aside, sex just for sex, or curses just for cursing, is lazy writing. impt to char and story go forth.#scriptchat
12:22 am StudioLAX: Just found #scriptchat & it's time for bed, working on script with sex scene, not sure how to write it, but some useful stuff here, thanks
12:22 am willentrekin: RT @KageyNYC: I'm going on record: I have no problems w movie sex or profanity. I just take issue w shitty writing. #scriptchat
12:22 am lisamarks: Good grief, what have I missed!?! RT @jeannevb: Id rather watch a great sexual-chemistry banter than a full blown f*cking scene #scriptchat
12:22 am michael2172: @Timsn now was black swan any good #scriptchat
12:22 am TheWriteScript: @readerproof I'm working on it! #scriptchat
12:22 am Todfilm: In one of my short films, there was a scene where a couple guys make out in a bathroom. #scriptchat
12:22 am covermyscript: this is not the bukkake you're looking for? RT @blankethouse: @eyamie @GCGeek Make it so Obi Won or whatever his name is #scriptchat
12:23 am walterhzownself: @yourgirlnxtdoor #scriptchat is regularly scheduled tweet discussion about #screenwriting with a predetermined topic.
12:23 am covermyscript: thanks, kim! RT @KimBergie: **I agree with X.** RT @covermyscript: @jeannevb somewhere between that and porn is the answer. #scriptchat
12:23 am Timsn: Haven't seen it -- just read the hype RT @michael2172: @Timsn now was black swan any good #scriptchat
12:23 am jeannevb: @StudioLAX we'll post a transcript later tonight at http://scriptchat.com #scriptchat
12:23 am CuttingRoomMRB: RT @willentrekin: RT @KageyNYC: I'm going on record: I have no problems w movie sex or profanity. I just take issue w shitty writing. #scriptchat
12:23 am Todfilm: I approached the make out scene like I would a dance. Everything was carefully choreographed. #scriptchat
12:23 am yeah_write: SPREAD was a movie with lots of gratuitous sex. Verging on porn if anyone is interested. Not sure if script available. #scriptchat
12:23 am kingisafink: Weird. It seems they don't make a lot of R films. RT @readerproof: Wish I got more G-rated specs. Everything I read is R rated. #scriptchat
12:23 am circlesoffire: And that's hot. :) RT @Todfilm: I approached the make out scene like I would a dance. Everything was carefully choreographed. #scriptchat
12:23 am Samuraiko: Something tells me I am going to have some serious explaining to do after this is over... #whatthehellissheWRITING #scriptchat
12:23 am eyamie: @covermyscript *Cin Cin* #scriptchat #cunninglinguist
12:23 am dwacon: Borrow from those Zoosk commercials... #scriptchat
12:24 am GermaineJames: RT @KageyNYC: Im going on record: I have no problems w movie sex or profanity. I just take issue w shitty writing. #scriptchat
12:24 am willentrekin: RT @yeah_write: "I HATE when 2 char in life-threatening sitn decide, 'we should make love.' Unrealistic." Should be fucking. #scriptchat
12:24 am GinySassenach: RT @covermyscript: Hey, Xandy! *waving* #scriptchat
12:24 am dianewms: My movie will have violence as it's about the War of 1812 with sea battles, & ill-treated sailors pressed in the Royal Navy. #scriptchat
12:24 am Samuraiko: @jeannevb Hot flashes? Hmmm... must have been some serious heat there! #scriptchat
12:24 am jeannevb: @lisamarks we're talking dirty scenes... jump on in #scriptchat
12:24 am dramadj: I say goodnight for today. New fellas who didn't see our short film yet, here it is http://youtu.be/K7e82xb_MaI english subbed! #scriptchat
12:24 am IceNinjaSquad: Can't sex scenes just be improvised? #scriptchat
12:24 am covermyscript: hi giny!!!! RT @GinySassenach: Hey, Xandy! *waving* #scriptchat
12:24 am oldiesmike: @SissiePoohSOD What is #scriptchat, Steph?
12:24 am StudioLAX: Two films with good sex scenes Crank & Crank 2 #scriptchat
12:25 am CuttingRoomMRB: Well said! @KageyNYC I'm going on record: I have no problems w movie sex or profanity. I just take issue w shitty writing. #scriptchat
12:25 am art1032: Sometimes good sexual tension is better than a half done or lame sex scene. #scriptchat
12:25 am covermyscript: i love you, clever man. RT @eyamie: xandy *Cin Cin* #scriptchat #cunninglinguist
12:25 am dianewms: @GinySassenach What idea did you get? Or can you tell? #scriptchat
12:25 am circlesoffire: @IceNinjaSquad Not unless you want really boring awkward sex scenes on screen. #scriptchat
12:25 am yeah_write: It would be lovely to have a director's POV on this subject. #scriptchat
12:25 am readerproof: @kingisafink It's true. Not as many R rated films out there but ALOT of R rated specs. 8 out of 10 that I read at least. #scriptchat
12:25 am Todfilm: @IceNinjaSquad Depends on the actors and how comfortable they are. Could just turn into awkward fumbling. #scriptchat
12:25 am TheWriteScript: Then there's the post-sex-scene lines that always include the word "amazing." Ugh. #scriptchat
12:25 am yeah_write: Agreed. @KageyNYC Im going on record: I have no problems w movie sex or profanity. I just take issue w shitty writing. #scriptchat
12:25 am circlesoffire: I'd say "always" not "sometimes." RT @art1032: Sometimes good sexual tension is better than a half done or lame sex scene. #scriptchat
12:26 am GinySassenach: @dianewms About needed detail in scene. Whether it is sex or not.... #scriptchat
12:26 am dwacon: I wrote a comedy where a woman accidentally backs into a live wire that morphs into Reddy Kilowatt with a lightning-bolt phallus #scriptchat
12:26 am sam_gurney: Haha! Yes! Even old lady dry humping! RT @StudioLAX: Two films with good sex scenes Crank & Crank 2 #scriptchat
12:26 am kingisafink: One issue w/ sex in U.S. films = we still abide by a CODE era puritanism & our R-rated films are only crass, not thoughtful. #scriptchat
12:26 am jeannevb: We all agree sex for sex sake isn't good writing, but try writing 1 just as an exercise. Learn. #scriptchat
12:26 am Samuraiko: @TheWriteScript UGH, don't you hate that? A vocabulary of 75000 words and "amazing" is the best you can do? #scriptchat
12:26 am GCGeek: Another idea on implying - remember the Venus Butterfly from TV's L.A. Law? A technique characters discussed but never revealed. #scriptchat
12:26 am michael2172: I think that profanity needs to fit with the type of script you are writing otherwise it?s just filler. #scriptchat
12:26 am readerproof: It's best to just write for PG-13 when starting out. Most R rated scripts turn into PG-13 anyway (like Taken) #scriptchat
12:26 am TenaciousTanaka: My rule is, does the blow job satisfy anything/anyone other than the receiver? If not keep, it in your pants. That is all. Ciao #scriptchat
12:26 am SharkGoddess: RT @readerproof: Wish I got more G-rated specs. Everything I read is R rated. #scriptchat
12:26 am blankethouse: @scripteach I just watched The Bank Job w/ Jason Statham, that had some unrealistic 'sex' scenes that didn't seem needed #ScriptChat
12:26 am walterhzownself: Sex scene for a PG/PG-13 film versus R rating: Would you write it differently? #screenwriting #scriptchat
12:26 am sam_gurney: Was it good for you? RT @TheWriteScript: Then theres the post-sex-scene lines that always include the word "amazing." Ugh. #scriptchat
12:27 am Samuraiko: I'll second that! @KageyNYC Im going on record: I have no problems w movie sex or profanity. I just take issue w shitty writing. #scriptchat
12:27 am CuttingRoomMRB: RT @jeannevb: We all agree sex for sex sake isn't good writing, but try writing 1 just as an exercise. Learn. #scriptchat
12:27 am GinySassenach: Are u going to grad us? RT @jeannevb: We all agree sex for sex sake isnt good writing, try writing 1 just as an exercise. #scriptchat
12:27 am jeannevb: yes! RT @GCGeek: remember the Venus Butterfly from TVs L.A. Law? A technique characters discussed but never revealed. #scriptchat
12:27 am readerproof: RT @michael2172: I think that profanity needs to fit with the type of script you are writing otherwise it?s just filler. #scriptchat
12:27 am The_Jodi: I do wish violent sex wasn't equated with hot sex onscreen so often. #scriptchat
12:27 am eyamie: @kingisafink Yup, but I love the code movies. They conveyed more and begged you to infer. #scriptchat
12:27 am karlabry: Unless it's x-rated,why would a script need to go into very specific detail in a sex scene? #scriptchat
12:27 am TheWriteScript: @sam_gurney Even worse. Yeah, if you have to ask... #scriptchat
12:27 am jeannevb: @CuttingRoomMRB I see our sex expert is here ;) heehee #scriptchat
12:27 am CtKscribe: Maybe, if it's a homemade porno. W/real actors, no. RT @IceNinjaSquad: Can't sex scenes just be improvised? #scriptchat
12:27 am kingisafink: Me too. @circlesoffire I'd say always not sometimes. RT @art1032: Sometimes good sexual tension is better than a lame sex scene. #scriptchat
12:28 am Todfilm: I just finished writing a script & the characters swore constantly. But they're gangsters not girl scouts so it fits. #scriptchat
12:28 am dwacon: @jeannevb @GCGeek Leaving a lot to the imagination is KEY to the effective secks seen... #scriptchat
12:28 am jeannevb: If i sweat, u pass ;) RT @GinySassenach: u going to grad us? RT @jeannevb: ...try writing 1 just as an exercise. #scriptchat
12:28 am amgamble: @kingisafink Word. Check out the doc "This Film Is Not Yet Rated," dir. Kirby Dick #scriptchat
12:28 am readerproof: Exactly RT @karlabry: Unless its x-rated,why would a script need to go into very specific detail in a sex scene? #scriptchat
12:28 am cinekink: RT @art1032: Sometimes good sexual tension is better than a half done or lame sex scene. #scriptchat
12:28 am art1032: Psft,that word is overused.@TheWriteScript Then there's the post-sex-scene lines that always include the word "amazing." Ugh. #scriptchat
12:28 am GCGeek: @covermyscript @blankethouse @eyamie LOMFL! #scriptchat
12:28 am PortlandPaige23: RT @willentrekin: RT @KageyNYC: I'm going on record: I have no problems w movie sex or profanity. I just take issue w shitty writing. #scriptchat
12:28 am Samuraiko: @The_Jodi Too true, too true. :( Intense = good. Violent = not good. #scriptchat
12:28 am eyamie: Speaking of writing my sex scenes, Fergie is singing on tv right now. #scriptchat
12:28 am stephbelding: @IceNinjaSquad Yeah, not so much;as an actor, I prefer choreography of sorts, detailed direction, if scene is oblique #scriptchat
12:28 am CtKscribe: @dianewms And the sex and the profanity? #ScriptChat
12:29 am Samuraiko: @jeannevb Can it be prose? Or MUST it be a script? (Coz I've got some hot prose you might like...) #scriptchat
12:29 am jeannevb: you do realize we're all going to have some major spam bots after this chat :) #scriptchat
12:29 am yeah_write: @jeannevb We should have a sex scene screenwriting contest. lol #scriptchat
12:29 am Todfilm: I think sex scenes are very similar to fight sequences. You can either write "they make love" or you can go into detail. up 2 u #scriptchat
12:29 am CuttingRoomMRB: RT @eyamie: Speaking of writing my sex scenes, Fergie is singing on tv right now. #scriptchat
12:29 am michael2172: my fear is you put too much detail or 2 little in a sex scene for a spec script could hurt your chances #scriptchat
12:30 am Todfilm: I'm trying to remember which script it was, but there was some action film where all the fight sequences just said "they fight" #scriptchat
12:30 am jeannevb: either :) RT @Samuraiko: @jeannevb Can it be prose? Or MUST it be a script? (Coz Ive got some hot prose you might like...) #scriptchat
12:30 am IceNinjaSquad: Yeah. Maybe not improvised but I don't think they should be scripted. Director and actors should call the shots. #scriptchat
12:30 am azurelunatic: RT @Samuraiko: Oh hell YES! RT @jeannevb I'd rather watch a great sexual-chemistry banter than a full blown f*cking scene #scriptchat
12:30 am readerproof: However, if done the right way in a comedy, sex scenes are fine. Erection can be a very funny word. #scriptchat
12:30 am eyamie: @stephbelding You need the writer to set the tone, right? #scriptchat
12:30 am jeannevb: I am SOOO judging that! :) RT @yeah_write: @jeannevb We should have a sex scene screenwriting contest. lol #scriptchat
12:30 am lisamarks: Lousy at writing sex scenes. Bafflingly teenage results. Do actors like to be told every hip thrust, moan or gyration? #scriptchat
12:30 am GCGeek: And just like in high school, I can't keep up with everyone tonight! This is chat is fast, furious and Advanced Placement! #scriptchat
12:30 am circlesoffire: @Todfilm But likewise, if you want an elaborate fight scene or sex scene, it will have to be choreographed ultimately. #scriptchat
12:30 am Samuraiko: @jeannevb Woot! Time to go through the Pillow Book Tales and see if I can raise your temperature... :D #scriptchat
12:30 am TheWriteScript: "Amazing." When I see that or hear that, I cringe. It's so The Bachelor. #scriptchat
12:30 am The_Jodi: I figure you write enough of a sex scene so the director and actors get the intention ... Like any other scene. #scriptchat
12:30 am writeononline: @jeannevb Maybe I should do as a Write On Challenge? RT @jeannevb: ...try writing 1 just as an exercise #scriptchat.
12:31 am dwacon: Enough detail to spark the imagination. Vague enough to allow the imagination to take over. #scriptchat
12:31 am jeannevb: HA RT @WriteOnOnline: @jeannevb Maybe I should do as a Write On Challenge? RT @jeannevb: ...try writing 1 just as an exercise #scriptchat.
12:31 am TacoBuff: #scriptchat Huh...I never thought about sex scenes from strictly a writer's point of view, but often as a writer/director. Weird. *thinks*
12:31 am GCGeek: Pen name/anonymous & I'm in! #PunUnintended RT @yeah_write: @jeannevb We should have a sex scene screenwriting contest. lol #scriptchat
12:31 am michael2172: RT @The_Jodi: I figure you write enough of a sex scene so the director and actors get the intention ... Like any other scene. #scriptchat
12:31 am cinekink: Seems at minimum one should sketch out the beginning and end points of the scene, why they matter. #scriptchat
12:31 am Todfilm: @circlesoffire Depends on who is doing your choreography. Besides, the director is gonna change a lot of it anyway #scriptchat
12:31 am yeah_write: Instead of having massive follow from bots, I'm getting massive unfollow. Prudes! #scriptchat
12:31 am PennyAsh: Did someone say sex? #scriptchat
12:31 am Samuraiko: Let's be honest, it's not like you have to give stage directions. Most of us know how it works. Take 2+ partners and mix well. #scriptchat
12:31 am CtKscribe: "Make Love" vs."Fuck" has a lot to do w/genre and demographic the script is written for, not "realism" #ScriptChat
12:31 am circlesoffire: I really believe it's not about the detail, too much or too little. It's about how much you earn it with the audience. #scriptchat
12:31 am mamajalapa: RT @PennyAsh: Did someone say sex? #scriptchat
12:32 am ShaiHussain: #scriptchat You don't need a sex scene to make a film sexy. Out Of Sight, anyone?
12:32 am UncompletedWork: Showtime Australia has this trashy show that's just jam packed with sex http://bit.ly/bCHVXL #scriptchat
12:32 am HoodedMan: Most sex scenes in films and books aren't that at all, but lack boldness #scriptchat
12:32 am circlesoffire: The sex scene has to be worth while, it has to have a purpose. Otherwise, it's a waste of screen time. #scriptchat
12:32 am kingisafink: Oh @eyamie I love the code movies, too. Especially the ones that bumped right up against the rules. #scriptchat
12:32 am Todfilm: @decemberandy I don't think so. I want to say it was a film like The Matrix or something where the fight sequences were good. #scriptchat
12:32 am jeannevb: and cowboys : ) RT @PennyAsh: Did someone say sex? #scriptchat
12:33 am eyamie: @kingisafink Mad Love. That is all. #scriptchat
12:33 am art1032: Agreed :)@CtKscribe "Make Love" vs."Fuck" has a lot to do w/genre and demographic the script is written for, not "realism" #ScriptChat
12:33 am LauraVanVleet: Whether to commit to sex, tension, swearing- all depends on what story and characters need to reveal before fade out #scriptchat
12:33 am HoodedMan: Sex scenes should make the audience feel it, quite simple, a visceral reaction #scriptchat
12:33 am jeannevb: I like the research #justsayin #scriptchat
12:33 am willentrekin: Sex in prose is easier than sex in screenwriting. Fewer studios than publishers will get behind explicit. #scriptchat
12:33 am lizziside: Of course some are better than others, take Antonioni's sex scenes in BLOW-UP #scriptchat
12:33 am jolenejahnke: Agreed! RT @dwacon: Enough detail to spark the imagination. Vague enough to allow the imagination to take over. #scriptchat
12:33 am yeah_write: RT @willentrekin: RT @yeah_write: ... 'we should make love.' Unrealistic." (Should be fucking.) <---This was Will's not mine. #scriptchat
12:33 am PennyAsh: @jeannevb Yee Haw :) #scriptchat
12:33 am The_Jodi: (Is Pillowbook Ewan McGregor?) #scriptchat
12:33 am dianewms: My protag is older at 34 & his new wife is likely a virgin at 19 (in 1814), unless they made whoopee on a previous shore leave. #scriptchat
12:34 am circlesoffire: @Todfilm I think #TheMatrix is also an example of a sex scene done badly. Unfortunately. #scriptchat
12:34 am SharkGoddess: @yeah_write Why are people even offended by sex? We were made to have it. It's part of life. #scriptchat
12:34 am eyamie: RT @willentrekin: Sex in prose is easier than sex in screenwriting. Fewer studios than publishers will get behind explicit. #scriptchat
12:34 am KageyNYC: So proud that we have @cinekink here for our #scriptchat talk on sex. Cinekink rules the intersection between sex & art.
12:34 am jeannevb: RT @HoodedMan: Sex scenes should make the audience feel it, quite simple, a visceral reaction #scriptchat
12:34 am RexSikesMovieBt: RT @Hollywood_Trey: @kingisafink 2 go even further, sex scenes, lk any other scene, shld push forward the story's theme. #scriptchat
12:34 am lampsreincarnat: #ScriptChat Should sex scenes be so difficult to write. I mean, we've all had em.
12:34 am PennyAsh: @CtKscribe: "Make Love" vs."Fuck" It's all about the character and what he/she would say #ScriptChat
12:34 am walterhzownself: @jeannevb agreed! #scriptchat
12:34 am willentrekin: Can't think of last mainstream, American, studio movie that included explicit sex. Violence and guns, sure, but no sex. #scriptchat
12:34 am Todfilm: Mot many ppl say "Let's make love." or "Let's fuck." Usually they just start doing it. #scriptchat
12:35 am chained: #tomcruise shouting penis huge fucking erect penis at his mum in #bornontheforthofjuly makes me laugh #scriptchat #penis
12:35 am sam_gurney: Agreed. RT @ShaiHussain: #scriptchat You dont need a sex scene to make a film sexy. Out Of Sight, anyone? #scriptchat
12:35 am HoodedMan: When people are turned on by watching or reading a sex scene it's a success #scriptchat
12:35 am PennyAsh: @circlesoffire Exactly. It has to move the story forward #scriptchat
12:35 am scripteach: Producers must wanted them to help sell film RT @blankethouse: The Bank Job had unrealistic 'sex' scenes that didn't seem needed #ScriptChat
12:35 am willentrekin: And by "explicit sex," I mean depiction of penetration, just like by violence I mean depiction of shit blowing up. #scriptchat
12:35 am CtKscribe: In your universe, yes. RT @PennyAsh: @CtKscribe: "Make Love" vs."Fuck" It's all about the character and what he/she would say #ScriptChat
12:35 am SharkGoddess: @The_Jodi Yes, Ewan was fabulous in it. Such a torrid tale... #scriptchat
12:35 am The_Jodi: And intimacy issues! :)@CtKscribe "Make Love" vs."Fuck" has a lot to do w/genre and demographic the script is written for #ScriptChat
12:35 am Todfilm: The film industry in general has gotten a lot more tame when it comes to sex and profanity. #scriptchat
12:35 am jeannevb: @walterhzownself :) #scriptchat
12:35 am eyamie: RT @SissiePoohSOD: I can't stand bad language being used for the sake of bad language. #scriptchat
12:35 am Samuraiko: @willentrekin True, but it's at least a good foundation for a scene if you can make the intent itself work in prose. #scriptchat
12:35 am IceNinjaSquad: I like this #scriptchat thing. Maybe I'll join in next time. They might be talking about something I'm more likely to write about.
12:35 am writeononline: "I am 3/4 serious" @jeannevb Maybe I should do as a Write On Challenge? RT @jeannevb: ...try writing 1 just as an exercise #scriptchat.
12:35 am lisamarks: I like ur style :) I may have to get you on my podcast #sexchatahemsorryscriptchat RT @jeannevb: I like the research #justsayin #scriptchat
12:36 am blankethouse: @Samuraiko depends on the actors and/or director. They maybe out of practice. Just saying #scriptchat
12:36 am julichilliard: RT @eyamie: RT @SissiePoohSOD: I can't stand bad language being used for the sake of bad language. #scriptchat
12:36 am LauraVanVleet: RT @jeannevb: RT @HoodedMan: Sex scenes should make the audience feel it, quite simple, a visceral reaction #scriptchat
12:36 am michael2172: Anyone know where you can down load the script Body Heat? #scriptchat
12:36 am eyamie: @Todfilm Or some say "get the butter" #scriptchat
12:36 am jeannevb: @lisamarks I'm there :) #scriptchat
12:36 am TheWriteScript: It's not an issue of being offended, it's crafting a good story and not using cheap tools to build character, but real skill. #scriptchat
12:36 am art1032: RT @eyamie: RT @SissiePoohSOD: I can't stand bad language being used for the sake of bad language. #scriptchat
12:36 am writeononline: @jeannevb "I am 3/4 serious" is from a movie with a lot of (if memory serves) unseen sex - "Same Time Next Year" #scriptchat.
12:36 am willentrekin: More people have sex than ever might shoot a gun, but yet there's something taboo about depicting the former. #scriptchat
12:36 am circlesoffire: Like 3D! ;) RT @HoodedMan: Sex scenes should make the audience feel it, quite simple, a visceral reaction #scriptchat
12:36 am jeannevb: @michael2172 we have some links on our blog to download scripts http://scriptchat.com #scriptchat
12:36 am tracinell: wicked hilarious! RT @eyamie: @Todfilm Or some say "get the butter" #scriptchat
12:37 am sam_gurney: Has anyone read the '9 Songs' script? #scriptchat
12:37 am Samuraiko: @blankethouse *laughing* I'm seeing Visio diagrams... Insert Part A into Slot B, and wiggle til it fits... #scriptchat
12:37 am ShaiHussain: RT @yeah_write "Instead of having massive follow from bots, I'm getting massive unfollow. Prudes!" Holy crap-just got the same! #scriptchat
12:37 am scripteach: As director or writer? RT @Todfilm: I approached make out scene like I would a dance. Everything was carefully choreographed. #scriptchat
12:37 am blankethouse: @scripteach my thoughts exactly, it was in opening scene too. Oh well live and learn #ScriptChat
12:37 am jeannevb: @writeononline I'm winning that contest :) #scriptchat
12:37 am elizabethkarr: Fast & Furious in here. Newbie. Both cracking up and learning thing or 2. #scriptchat
12:37 am SharkGoddess: What about TV? #scriptchat
12:37 am SissiePoohSOD: if I'm going to write a scene where bad language is used, I want the language to define the characters. #scriptchat
12:37 am PennyAsh: @HoodedMan Boldness as in? #scriptchat
12:37 am stephbelding: Totslly. Then, actors/director figure it out. RT @eyamie @stephbelding You need the writer to set the tone, right? #scriptchat
12:37 am GinySassenach: @HoodedMan Yes, but you can be turned on during th sex scene and it have nothing to do with movie #scriptchat
12:37 am yeah_write: Very fast tonight. RT @elizabethkarr: Fast & Furious in here. Newbie. Both cracking up and learning thing or 2. #scriptchat
12:37 am jeannevb: this is just foreplay :) RT @elizabethkarr: Fast & Furious in here. Newbie. Both cracking up and learning thing or 2. #scriptchat
12:37 am Todfilm: To those who brought it up, yes the sex in Matrix was really bad. Although in my mind the sequels never happened. #scriptchat
12:38 am IceNinjaSquad: @stephbelding It must be awkward to direct/be directed though. #scriptchat
12:38 am CuttingRoomMRB: I'm here to weigh in on sex in movies from an "artistic perspective".. hehe RT @jeannevb I see our sex expert is here ;) heehee #scriptchat
12:38 am dianewms: My War of 1812 hero has overcome many hardships, & romancing a young wife as a seldom-home sailor is a new challenge for him. #scriptchat
12:38 am garnerhaines: #scriptchat Wrote sex scenes in 1/2 of my 6 features. Some were plot points, the other character moments, one gratuity.
12:38 am TheWriteScript: @SharkGoddess You got to deal with the legal dept. #scriptchat
12:38 am Groonk: RT @willentrekin: More people have sex than ever might shoot a gun, but yet there's something taboo about depicting the former. #scriptchat
12:38 am circlesoffire: @Todfilm I'm with you on erasing 2 and 3 from #TheMatrix canon. So sad. #scriptchat
12:38 am lisamarks: Has anyone seen NINE ROOMS? I've heard that it was pretty graphic. Those kinds of sex scenes seem so 'Eighties' to me somehow. #scriptchat
12:38 am LauraVanVleet: RT @tracinell: wicked hilarious! RT @eyamie: @Todfilm Or some say "get the butter" #scriptchat
12:38 am mdaystory: @michael2172 here - http://www.imsdb.com/scripts/Body-Heat.html #scriptchat
12:38 am HoodedMan: @PennyAsh beyond the average citizen's acceptance threshold #scriptchat
12:38 am jeannevb: @CuttingRoomMRB suuuuure you are ;) #scriptchat
12:38 am Todfilm: @scripteach I was directing a scene I wrote. I wrote the major movements but allowed for improvisation through rehearsal. #scriptchat
12:38 am yeah_write: LMAO RT @Samuraiko: @blankethouse *laughing* Im seeing Visio diagrams... Insert Part A into Slot B, and wiggle til it fits... #scriptchat
12:38 am The_Jodi: Mmmm! @sam_gurney: Agreed. RT @ShaiHussain: #scriptchat You dont need a sex scene to make a film sexy. Out Of Sight, anyone? #scriptchat"
12:38 am elizabethkarr: @jeannevb "this is just foreplay" LOL And who says writers aren't sexy? #scriptchat
12:39 am SissiePoohSOD: just look at Scorsese's movies. bad language abounds abounds, but it defines the chars & sets the mood. #scriptchat
12:39 am chained: Americans say friken a lot but in UK we never say that what's it supposed to mean ? #scriptchat
12:39 am treycrim: 2 films that are great no matter what! Drink a Red Bull & dive in! RT @StudioLAX: Two films with good sex scenes Crank & Crank 2 #scriptchat
12:39 am michael2172: RT @Todfilm: To those who brought it up, yes the sex in Matrix was really bad. n my mind the sequels never happened. (LMAO) #scriptchat
12:39 am jeannevb: @elizabethkarr :) #scriptchat
12:39 am CtKscribe: A screenwriter who marks a scene for "improv" ... I'd have to say is sans genitalia of any gender. #ScriptChat
12:39 am stephbelding: Depends on the room, the folk involved. It's our job. RT @IceNinjaSquad It must be awkward to direct/be directed though. #scriptchat
12:39 am SissiePoohSOD: Matrix 2 & 3 NEVER happened. :) #scriptchat
12:39 am PennyAsh: @CtKscribe My universe? #ScriptChat
12:39 am michael2172: @mdaystory thank you very much #scriptchat
12:39 am mdaystory: @chained friken is just a lame-ass soft core version of fucking. #scriptchat
12:40 am dwacon: @Todfilm True in the cinema. But there is always the DVD with the director?s cut. #scriptchat
12:40 am yeah_write: To me, the lead in to the sex scene is so much more important than the scene itself. Director will make it what he wants. #scriptchat
12:40 am scripteach: Absolutely! Different expectations/parameters. RT @walterhzownself: Sex scene 4 PG/PG-13 film v. R: Would you write differently? #scriptchat
12:40 am ShaiHussain: #scriptchat Think writing a sex scene is hard, I've got a rape scene in my next script. 'Write what you know' doesn't bode too well here...
12:40 am jeannevb: recently @filmutopia did a post with a video clip... great scene... will hunt for it now. Hold down the whore house while I look #scriptchat
12:40 am HoodedMan: @GinySassenach You might, but the chance isn't that big, since sex is far more than pure mechanics, of course #scriptchat
12:40 am TheWriteScript: I think the entire script should be foreplay...it's how the writer grabs the audience and keeps them for 90 min. #scriptchat
12:40 am UncompletedWork: Whatever happened to the strange 80's tradition of shower scenes. Let's bring it back. -- hot tub time machine style! /ducks/ #Scriptchat
12:41 am GCGeek: I think the idea of sex (imagination, anticipation, attraction) or the possibility of it is sexier than the act itself. #scriptchat
12:41 am tracinell: exactly. RT @yeah_write: To me, the lead in to the sex scene is so much more important than the scene itself. Director will... #scriptchat
12:41 am Todfilm: I do have to say that in Europe sex is seen as commonplace and violence is seen as offensive. #scriptchat
12:41 am eyamie: RT @TheWriteScript: the entire script should be foreplay...its how the writer grabs the audience and keeps them for 90 min. #scriptchat
12:41 am scripteach: Cool. RT @Todfilm: I was directing a scene I wrote. I wrote the major movements but allowed for improvisation through rehearsal. #scriptchat
12:41 am mdaystory: @ShaiHussain rape scenes are easier than sex scenes. violence usually easier to write than passion. #scriptchat
12:41 am Samuraiko: @UncompletedWork As long as it's not that whatever-it-was in "Top Gun"... *shudder* No, no, no, no, no. #scriptchat
12:41 am eactipis: RT @Todfilm: I think sex scenes are very similar to fight sequences. You can either write "they make love" or you can go into detail. up 2 u #scriptchat
12:42 am PennyAsh: @HoodedMan Ah, still has to move the story forward otherwise it's gratuitous and a waste of film #scriptchat
12:42 am RexSikesMovieBt: sex shuld b no difft thn anything else - shuld hve a point, mve story 4ward, B riveting & reveal charactr thru behavior #ScriptChat
12:42 am Todfilm: @dwacon True. Seems like the studios want PG-13 movies so they can sell more tickets. #scriptchat
12:42 am elizabethkarr: Writing sex scenes, leave room 4 actors 2 breathe life into words. If writing intention is clear, good actors take from there. #scriptchat
12:42 am SharkGoddess: How old does a character need to be on TV for a rape scene? #scriptchat
12:42 am dianewms: 2 sex scenes in "The Town" both with Ben Affleck: one fully clothed "just sex" w/ ex gf, the other nude & very loving w/ new gf. #scriptchat
12:42 am michael2172: As a writer and a director I think I have issues separating the two sometimes when writing something like a sex scene. #scriptchat
12:42 am eyamie: @mdaystory @shaihussain rape scenes much like pet-killing scenes. Great way to lose an audience if not pitch-perfect #scriptchat
12:42 am stephbelding: RT @RexSikesMovieBt: sex shuld b no difft thn anything else - shuld hve a point, mve story 4ward, B riveting & reveal charactr thru behavior #ScriptChat
12:43 am jeannevb: @RexSikesMovieBt agree... and thanks for joining in! #scriptchat
12:43 am claudethewriter: @Todfilm what's missing from the Matrix sex scenes? They got the point across. besides, that's what sex with Keanu looks like #scriptchat
12:43 am RexSikesMovieBt: sum1 is jst lking 4 sum hot porn 2 read HAHA RT @yeah_write: @jeannevb We shld have a sex scene screenwriting contest. lol #scriptchat
12:43 am michael2172: RT @eyamie: @mdaystory @shaihussain rape scenes much like pet-killing scenes. Great way to lose an audience if not pitch-perfect #scriptchat
12:43 am Samuraiko: @SharkGoddess I don't think age really matters. If one wants to, the other doesn't, and it dissolves to force, it's rape. #scriptchat
12:43 am elizabethkarr: @RexSikesMovieBt Agree. Good writing is good writing period. #scriptchat
12:43 am TheWriteScript: @SharkGoddess That'll depend. Law and Order/any procedural is dif. Are you showing the scene or referring to it? #scriptchat
12:43 am SissiePoohSOD: @Todfilm: PG-13's are an easy sell for the studios. Wall Street 2 is PG-13, the original was an R. #scriptchat
12:43 am CuttingRoomMRB: Rather disturbing don't you think? @mdaystory violence usually easier to write than passion. #scriptchat
12:43 am Timsn: If the sex scene prevents the story from moving then it's not necessary. We get the idea. #scriptchat
12:44 am SharkGoddess: @Samuraiko Top Gun's scene was disappointing to say the least... #scriptchat
12:44 am scripteach: Way it should be. But Puritans founded us! RT @Todfilm: Europe sex is seen as commonplace and violence is seen as offensive. #scriptchat
12:44 am jeannevb: busted :) RT @RexSikesMovieBt: sum1 is jst lking 4 sum hot porn 2 read HAHA RT @yeah_write: @jeannevb #scriptchat
12:44 am Todfilm: @claudethewriter It does make sense that someone who spends all his life in a computer game wouldn't be good at sex. #scriptchat
12:44 am PennyAsh: @eyamie For some things a nice fade to black or a scene change is still the most powerful #scriptchat
12:44 am eyamie: Best post-sex scene: Me, Myself and Irene. It involves a shower, @uncompletedwork ! #scriptchat
12:44 am mdaystory: @eyamie yep. again, it's all about taste and restraint. And staying true to character & story. @shaihussain #scriptchat
12:44 am dwacon: @SharkGoddess @Samuraiko The music made up for it. #scriptchat
12:44 am UncompletedWork: Aww how nice, just got email from pitchfest attendee that came to #ScreenwriterKaraoke they're heading to the expo, checkin in #Scriptchat
12:44 am KageyNYC: I want to judge that. RT @yeah_write: @jeannevb We should have a sex scene screenwriting contest. lol #scriptchat
12:44 am yeah_write: @michael2172 San Jose must be full of Tweeters. I have so many in my feed make me feel at home. #scriptchat
12:45 am Samuraiko: @SharkGoddess @dwacon But can you hear "Take My Breath Away" without thinking of that scene? I can't. *groan* #scriptchat
12:45 am DavidLNewhoff: "Sex is only dirty if it's done right." -- Woody Allen #scriptchat
12:45 am jeannevb: After chat, watch this first video Maxence Cyrin via @filmutopia http://tinyurl.com/38c2udt #scriptchat
12:45 am LauraVanVleet: vulnerability and showing a characters true self in that underbelly moment is always harder to write - than violence. #scriptchat
12:45 am circlesoffire: @CuttingRoomMRB @mdaystory Violence is largely externally focused/intelligible. Sex is the opposite. Makes it easier to show. #scriptchat
12:45 am KageyNYC: I've fallen way behind in #scriptchat. Hey, some people like to take their time.
12:45 am art1032: I agree:)@mdaystory @ShaiHussain rape scenes are easier than sex scenes. violence usually easier to write than passion. #scriptchat
12:45 am michael2172: RT @SissiePoohSOD: @Todfilm: PG-13s are an easy sell for the studios. Wall Street 2 is PG-13, the original was an R.(good point) #scriptchat
12:45 am circlesoffire: RT @DavidLNewhoff: "Sex is only dirty if its done right." -- Woody Allen #scriptchat
12:45 am HoodedMan: @PennyAsh Perhaps, but why shouldn't a story has a random, casual sex scene, just like life? #scriptchat
12:45 am eyamie: @KageyNYC @jeannevb Scene contest entry complete: "The Dirtiest Sanchez" #scriptchat
12:45 am Todfilm: Although call me old fashioned, but I still like the "They get into bed, pull up the covers and turn off the lights" #scriptchat
12:45 am covermyscript: i'd win. ;-p RT @KageyNYC: I want to judge that. RT @yeah_write: @jeannevb We should have a sex scene screenwriting contest. lol #scriptchat
12:45 am lizziside: LOL RT @Samuraiko: But can you hear "Take My Breath Away" without thinking of that scene? I cant. *groan* #scriptchat
12:45 am chained: @mdaystory Thanks wasn't sure if friken was a play on the word frigging ie a woman mastrabating #scriptchat naught scriptchat
12:45 am yeah_write: Yes! Yes! RT @PennyAsh: @eyamie For some things a nice fade to black or a scene change is still the most powerful #scriptchat
12:46 am CtKscribe: @Timsn Sex scenes are almost always superfluous. But people love The Sex. A kiss could handle the needed connection. #ScriptChat
12:46 am mdaystory: @PennyAsh @eyamie For some things a nice fade to black or a scene change is still the most powerful --And symbolic imagery. #scriptchat
12:46 am Todfilm: That would be an interesting challenge, to write an explicit sex scene in detail. #scriptchat
12:46 am jolenejahnke: I prefer to watch ;) RT @KageyNYC: Ive fallen way behind in #scriptchat. Hey, some people like to take their time. #scriptchat
12:46 am CuttingRoomMRB: Throwing the floor open to discussion. Give some examples of the best and worst uses of sex scenes in a movie. @jeannevb #scriptchat
12:46 am lmcnelly: Can I be in charge of casting? RT @yeah_write: @jeannevb We should have a sex scene screenwriting contest. lol #scriptchat
12:46 am jeannevb: Gone With the Wind... we never saw Rhett & Scarlett naked, but man, were they hot #scriptchat
12:46 am cinekink: And we'll screen! RT @KageyNYC I want to judge that. RT @yeah_write: @jeannevb We should have a sexscene screenwriting contest. #scriptchat
12:46 am PennyAsh: BTW I write this stuff for a living :) #scriptchat
12:46 am michael2172: @yeah_write i know good chat tonight #scriptchat
12:47 am dwacon: Life Is Hot in Cracktown has a variety of scenes... from violent to passionate. #scriptchat
12:47 am eyamie: RT @Todfilm: Although call me old fashioned, but I still like "They get into bed, pull up the covers and turn off the lights" #scriptchat
12:47 am covermyscript: prudes. RT @yeah_write: Yes! Yes! RT @PennyAsh: @eyamie ...a nice fade to black or a scene change is still the most powerful #scriptchat
12:47 am HoodedMan: I've rarely agreed when the word "gratuitous" has been used in a review. It's usual a cop-out in a bad review #scriptchat
12:47 am jeannevb: Bring it! RT @covermyscript: i'd win. ;-p RT @KageyNYC: I want to judge that. RT @yeah_write: @jeannevb sex scene contest. lol #scriptchat
12:47 am elizabethkarr: @yeah_write or camera lingering on the faces, expressions. We get the idea. Often less is more when comes 2 sex on screen. #scriptchat
12:47 am dwacon: Spader and Gyllenhaal set the screen on fire in Secretary. #scriptchat
12:47 am covermyscript: he raped her, jeanne. RT @jeannevb: Gone With the Wind... we never saw Rhett & Scarlett naked, but man, were they hot #scriptchat
12:47 am GCGeek: But Top Gun taught me it's OK if I want to stand on a milk crate for an illusion of height. #scriptchat
12:47 am SissiePoohSOD: I prefer it when some things are left to the audience's imagination. Imagination is often hotter than onscreen. #scriptchat
12:47 am circlesoffire: @jeannevb But Rhett & Scarlett got one helluva dance sequence, and some domestic violence on a stairwell. #sexinthepast #scriptchat
12:47 am Todfilm: Does Clockwork Orange count? I love the sped up Benny Hill sex scene. #scriptchat
12:47 am CtKscribe: More hacks than Artists. RT @CuttingRoomMRB: Rather disturbing don't u think? @mdaystory violence easier to write than passion. #scriptchat
12:47 am AdamRotmil: RT @elizabethkarr: Writing sex scenes, leave room 4 actors 2 breathe life into words. If writing intention is clear, good actors take from there. #scriptchat
12:47 am karlabry: I think @ozzywood said the audience gets confused when breasts & buttocks start flashing across screen. Needs 2 b a reason 4 it. #scriptchat
12:47 am jeannevb: WOOT! RT @CineKink: And we'll screen! RT @KageyNYC I want to judge that. RT @yeah_write: @jeannevb sexscene contest. #scriptchat
12:47 am KageyNYC: For reasons I'll avoid saying, that @UncompletedWork is one lucky guy!!! #scriptchat
12:48 am chained: #nakedgun when frankdrebin reads erotic novel to wake up bored people at #green energy convention " her silken femininity " #scriptchat
12:48 am covermyscript: @jeannevb i mean it all worked out and they were hot... but he still raped his wife. and then called her a bad mother. #scriptchat
12:48 am PennyAsh: @yeah_write @mdaystory @covermyscript Engage the viewer's (reader's) imagination #scriptchat
12:48 am Todfilm: Actually, good scene in Fast Times At Ridgmont High. Shows the awkwardness of teenage sex painfully realistically. #scriptchat
12:48 am KageyNYC: YES! RT @CineKink: And we'll screen! RT @KageyNYC I want to judge RT @yeah_write @jeannevb a sexscene screenwriting contest. #scriptchat
12:48 am UncompletedWork: Read "Girls Gone Wild with the Wind" RT @jeannevb Gone With the Wind we never saw Rhett & Scarlett naked, but man, were they hot #scriptchat
12:48 am yeah_write: RT @elizabethkarr: @yeah_write ... Often less is more when comes 2 sex on screen. #scriptchat
12:48 am Samuraiko: Brings up another idea: not just how it's shot and how it's written, but the music that goes with said scenes can make or break. #scriptchat
12:48 am elizabethkarr: @jeannevb Yes, maa'm re GWTW. When Rhett carries Scarlett up staircase-what is hotter than that? Becuz chars were so clr defined #scriptchat
12:48 am CuttingRoomMRB: @mdaystory @circlesoffire Point taken. My question is, should it be that way? #scriptchat
12:48 am sam_gurney: Shirley MacLaine masturbating scene in 'Being There' - says it all about both the characters (her and Chance). #scriptchat
12:49 am scripteach: Those are hard. We don't want to watch. IRRÉVERSIBLE was unbearable. RT @ShaiHussain: #scriptchat got a rape scene in next script...
12:49 am CtKscribe: If we could take all the hack writers in America, stack 'em up, we could use them as a new, SOLID, Levee for New Orleans. #ScriptChat
12:49 am Todfilm: @sam_gurney That's a good one. #scriptchat
12:49 am willentrekin: .@yeah_write Nothing porn-y or explicit about "Spread." You want good, explicit sex, European. Secret Things, 9 Songs, etc. #scriptchat
12:49 am GCGeek: @covermyscript @UncompletedWork Looks like I better step it up in my scenes before I hire either of you for reading services! #scriptchat
12:49 am FapCop: RT @sam_gurney: Shirley MacLaine masturbating scene in 'Being There' - says it all about both the characters (her and Chance). #scriptchat
12:49 am covermyscript: wanna? @jeannevb: Bring it! RT xandy: i'd win. ;-p @KageyNYC @yeah_write: sex scene contest. lol #scriptchat
12:49 am PennyAsh: @HoodedMan But it's still part of the character's story, even if it's casual, the viewer needs to care about what's going on #scriptchat
12:49 am SharkGoddess: @jeannevb Yes, and Gable had such bad teeth, at 34 he had them all veneered.#scriptchat
12:49 am HoodedMan: Sex is perfectly natural, you know, & that's also how it should be treated in stories, in #art in general & society as a whole #scriptchat
12:49 am cinekink: One thought I have while watching explicit sex scenes... can be a little like a musical, pull us out of the story. #scriptchat
12:49 am elizabethkarr: @scripteach Those are hard? Isn't that point? :) #scriptchat
12:49 am circlesoffire: @karlabry I don't get confused. I get bored. #scriptchat
12:50 am jeannevb: @covermyscript but they made audience stomach it by having her smiling & happy the next morning. Wld love to know behind scenes #scriptchat
12:50 am walterhzownself: @Todfilm I don't see the challenge in #screenwriting an explicit sex scene. IMO, the challenge would to convey the subtext. #scriptchat
12:50 am GinySassenach: RT @GCGeek: But Top Gun taught me its OK if I want to stand on a milk crate for an illusion of height. #scriptchat
12:50 am Timsn: The end of North By Northwest with the train going into the tunnel was brilliant. #scriptchat
12:50 am art1032: There is something to be said for "Symbolic Imagery." #scriptchat
12:50 am Samuraiko: @jeannevb If someone actually then films them, can I make the trailer? I could do a really good ad! :D #scriptchat
12:50 am LauraVanVleet: RT @sam_gurney: Shirley MacLaine masturbating scene in 'Being There' - says it all about both the characters (her and Chance). #scriptchat
12:50 am chained: #basicinstinct came out when I was 16 the only reason needed to go see it was reviews it had lot of #sex in it #scriptchat sex sells
12:50 am readerproof: RT @Timsn: The end of North By Northwest with the train going into the tunnel was brilliant. #scriptchat
12:50 am jeannevb: @Samuraiko YES! #scriptchat
12:50 am scripteach: Yes, but how much of actual act needs to be seen to make point? RT @elizabethkarr: Those are hard? Isn't that point? :) #scriptchat
12:50 am mdaystory: @CtKscribe yes, damn hacks. And misogynists. #scriptchat
12:50 am willentrekin: Fade-to-black = haven of less talented writers who can't pull off explicit & good simultaneously. On page, probably elsewhere. #scriptchat
12:50 am covermyscript: he was rhett butler and she was a brat who needed a good ass smacking. and that's what she got. @jeannevb #scriptchat
12:50 am The_Jodi: Absolutely :) RT@Todfilm: Actually, good scene in Fast Times. Shows the awkwardness of teenage sex painfully realistically. #scriptchat
12:50 am HoodedMan: @PennyAsh as I was saying #scriptchat
12:51 am KageyNYC: @kingisafink directs RT @covermyscript wanna? @jeannevb Bring it! RT xandy: i'd win. ;-p @KageyNYC @yeah_write sex scene contest #scriptchat
12:51 am walterhzownself: @Todfilm I agree. I'd like to read the script for Fast Times at Ridgemont High to see how the scene was written. #scriptchat
12:51 am ozzywood: Here's my single-tweet contribution for today: http://bit.ly/dplGch RT @karlabry: @ozzywood said @ozzywood gets confused...(LOL) #scriptchat
12:51 am jeannevb: our first #scriptchat collaboration is apparently going to be a soft p0rno filmed by @CineKink :)
12:51 am PennyAsh: @jeannevb Yep, there is a huge difference between sex and eroticism #scriptchat
12:51 am GCGeek: @Todfilm Totally agree. But I never listened to The Cars: Moving In Stereo the same way again. And I'm OK with that. #scriptchat
12:51 am elizabethkarr: @scripteach "Yes, but how much of actual act needs to be seen to make point?" For my taste, very little. 2 graphic takes me out #scriptchat
12:51 am willentrekin: Not their fault, though. Blame American studio system, hypocritical Puritanical values. Portnoy's complaint. #scriptchat
12:52 am jeannevb: both in prose & screenwriting RT @PennyAsh: @jeannevb Yep, there is a huge difference between sex and eroticism #scriptchat
12:52 am HoodedMan: Not much #writing for me tonight. I'm at least 5 hrs late... #scriptchat #amwriting
12:52 am Todfilm: also, y tu mama tambien sex scene was pretty hot. #scriptchat
12:52 am blankethouse: @jeannevb is it me or are there a TON of ppl on #scriptchat maybe its you!
12:52 am cinekink: In what sense? RT @PennyAsh @jeannevb Yep, there is a huge difference between sex and eroticism #scriptchat
12:52 am GCGeek: Really? "Top Gun" brings the bots? Who knew? #scriptchat
12:52 am jessenovels: Sex can make a huge statement in the story, gives the viewer the real look of your character, pulling away the fake mask. #scriptchat
12:52 am circlesoffire: @CuttingRoomMRB I don't know anything about "should," but I think writing violence and writing sex present different challenges. #scriptchat
12:52 am The_Jodi: Must read Shakespeare in Love! Great sex scenes :) #scriptchat
12:52 am authorViviAnna: I'm totally in for a sex scene contest #scriptchat
12:52 am WanderingiFilms: RT @Creative_Air: ever wonder how #scriptchat came about? @yeah_write talks about all about it here! http://j.mp/9vNDXM
12:52 am eyamie: Well, as is my wont, I'm gonna finish early and have a smoke. And then maybe I'll be in the mood for some more. Just stay here. #scriptchat
12:53 am willentrekin: For great discussion of sex, ratings, and system, see "This Film Is Not Yet Rated." Absolutely infuriating. #scriptchat
12:53 am michael2172: RT @GCGeek: Really? "Top Gun" brings the bots? Who knew? (LMAO) #scriptchat
12:53 am chained: I'm loosing followers due to #scriptchat ! I've offended some prudes by saying #penis ! Well they can fuck off then I have pottymouth
12:53 am PennyAsh: @covermyscript LOL not me :) I like the shock of the sudden change, making the reader/viewer shriek in terror :) #scriptchat
12:53 am karlabry: Hate it that tonight's topic is sex scenes & I'm forgetting to add the hashtag! #scriptchat. #notreallybeinginappropriate
12:53 am UncompletedWork: @GCGeek We're ready for you! Looking forward to it. #scriptchat
12:53 am Samuraiko: Sorry, @GCGeek, that was me talking about how bad it was, in relation to 80s movies scenes. *starts bot blasting* #scriptchat
12:53 am walterhzownself: RT @scripteach: Yes, but how much of actual act needs to be seen to make point? RT @elizabethkarr: Those are hard? Isn't that point? :) #scriptchat
12:53 am elizabethkarr: Gr8 Stoppard script thru and thru. RT @The_Jodi: Must read Shakespeare in Love! Great sex scenes :) #scriptchat
12:53 am scripteach: Exactly. Emotional/character value should be the goal. RT @elizabethkarr: For my taste, very little. 2 graphic takes me out #scriptchat
12:53 am covermyscript: you're my sex scene writing inspiration. i would have some contest there. RT @authorViviAnna: totally in for a sex scene contest #scriptchat
12:53 am HoodedMan: RT @jessenovels: Sex can make a huge statement in the story, gives the viewer the real look of your character, pulling away the fake mask. #scriptchat
12:53 am willentrekin: If Hollywood wants to censor pelvic thrusts depicted ("Original Sin") (and it does), shouldn't it censor bullets fired? #scriptchat
12:54 am GinySassenach: Risky Buisness sex scene was OK #scriptchat
12:54 am circlesoffire: @CuttingRoomMRB And it's not an either/or. Violence isn't always external or easily represented. Sex isn't always interior. #scriptchat
12:54 am PortlandPaige23: RT @CuttingRoomMRB: Rather disturbing don't you think? @mdaystory violence usually easier to write than passion. #scriptchat
12:54 am Samuraiko: Drat, must bail in the middle of #scriptchat. @jeannevb I expect to make a video for this. Even got the music. Later folks! #scriptchat
12:54 am cinekink: Er, "screened at" CineKink! RT @jeannevb our first #scriptchat collaboration is apparently going to be a soft p0rno filmed by @CineKink :)
12:54 am KageyNYC: @jeannevb I'll be curious to know if this is biggest turnout to #scriptchat yet. Oh, our community of horndogs! Love 'em!!
12:54 am jeannevb: NEWS: I'm teaching screenwriting craft webinar for @WritersDigest Oct 14th http://tinyurl.com/39ksubs... tho it will be rated G #scriptchat
12:54 am covermyscript: @KageyNYC @kingisafink @jeannevb @yeah_write totally. sounds perfect. #scriptchat
12:55 am LauraVanVleet: Another famous movie for some hot loven- 'Henry & June' and I do believe script is available to read. #scriptchat
12:55 am Todfilm: @tadjemiii I've heard that's a difficult film to watch. #scriptchat
12:55 am circlesoffire: Both sex and violence are context-specific. The quality they share is that they are highly distracting and can throw the aud. #scriptchat
12:55 am covermyscript: @PennyAsh so stab someone while they're fucking? #scriptchat
12:55 am sam_gurney: As for swearing: Alec Baldwin's speech in 'Glengarry Glen Ross' is great for introducing his character. #scriptchat
12:55 am PennyAsh: @CineKink Eroticism is all about the emotion, the build up, plain sex is purely physical #scriptchat
12:55 am GinySassenach: @jeannevb signed up and can't wait. #scriptchat
12:55 am michael2172: Yes but his shirt dance was much better RT @GinySassenach: Risky Buisness sex scene was OK #scriptchat
12:55 am Todfilm: @LauraVanVleet Wasn't that the first NC-17 movie? #scriptchat
12:55 am CuttingRoomMRB: Another valid point. @circlesoffire RT I think writing violence and writing sex present different challenges #scriptchat
12:55 am circlesoffire: What I think I want is for my audience to have an intense experience that loops them ever closer to my story. #scriptchat
12:55 am jessenovels: We all know sex can show us who are lover really is. In the heat of passion all rules are bent. #scriptchat
12:55 am ShaiHussain: @eyamie @scripteach @mdaystory Good points, but how do you write a rape scene when you've got nothing to reflect on? Hopefully? #scriptchat
12:55 am Kinniska: RT @kingisafink: One issue w/ sex in U.S. films = we still abide by a CODE era puritanism & our R-rated films are only crass, not thoughtful. #scriptchat
12:55 am scripteach: Just watched WHIP IT. Didn't show sex, but wonderfully showed impact of protag having had it 1st time, both positive & negative. #ScriptChat
12:55 am jeannevb: *smooch* RT @GinySassenach: @jeannevb signed up and can't wait. #scriptchat
12:56 am KageyNYC: Don't forget @CineKink - she's screening it! RT @covermyscript KageyNYC @kingisafink @jeannevb @yeah_write sounds perfect #scriptchat
12:56 am dwacon: David Mamet uses swearing to such a degree that he can make a clean line the most hurtful one delivered... #scriptchat
12:56 am Kinniska: RT @kingisafink: Me too. @circlesoffire I'd say always not sometimes. RT @art1032: Sometimes good sexual tension is better than a lame sex scene. #scriptchat
12:56 am PennyAsh: @covermyscript Depends on the story, read a book with a scene like that #scriptchat
12:56 am circlesoffire: RT @dwacon: David Mamet uses swearing to such a degree that he can make a clean line the most hurtful one delivered... #scriptchat
12:57 am art1032: @jeannevb I'll be signing up.(webinar) #scriptchat
12:57 am jeannevb: I bet we have tons of voyeurs tonight... #scriptchat
12:57 am walterhzownself: @KageyNYC see how easily we're attracted to this subject. ;-P #scriptchat
12:57 am covermyscript: getting my typewriter... it's gonna be a period sex piece. @KageyNYC @CineKink @kingisafink @jeannevb @yeah_write #scriptchat
12:57 am UncompletedWork: Best Sex scene? Hot Shots! In honor of meeting the great Jim Abrahams last night. http://youtu.be/_fqc4sKIxrs #scriptchat
12:57 am RexSikesMovieBt: keep in mind UR script in readers hands - is Dead if it cnt B read - make it riveting, readable, captivating - tight tight tight #scriptchat
12:57 am GinySassenach: I have a rape scene in my script.... #scriptchat
12:57 am emventker: @sam_gurney oh without a doubt! that speech is hands down amazing! #scriptchat
12:57 am TacoBuff: #scriptchat I do not think my friends @TracyClark_TLC or @TaniaBronwyn would write screenplays if the sex scenes could not be detailed.
12:57 am scripteach: Read survivors' stories. Let them inform you RT @ShaiHussain: how do you write rape scene when you've got nothing to reflect on? #scriptchat
12:57 am PennyAsh: @jeannevb Are we doing a sex scene contest? If so, how many minutes? #scriptchat
12:57 am covermyscript: i'll use a hand crank vibrator in it somewhere. lol. like eggbeater. @KageyNYC @CineKink @kingisafink @jeannevb @yeah_write #scriptchat
12:57 am jeannevb: @art1032 cool! Let me know if there's anything u want to be sure I cover :) #scriptchat
12:58 am lizziside: Rape is sheer violence and power. not sex. RT @ShaiHussain:how do you write a rape scene when youve got nothing to reflect on? #scriptchat
12:58 am emventker: oh, in a scene, the only thing hotter than having sex is not having sex, hands down @art1032 #scriptchat
12:58 am covermyscript: and so few exhibitionists. what a shame! RT @jeannevb: I bet we have tons of voyeurs tonight... #scriptchat
12:58 am tracinell: ha! RT @jeannevb: I bet we have tons of voyeurs tonight... #scriptchat
12:58 am jeannevb: u win RT @covermyscript: ill use handcrank vibrator in it like eggbeater. @KageyNYC @CineKink @kingisafink @jeannevb @yeah_write #scriptchat
12:58 am GCGeek: So whether a scene is sexy, violent, a character's epiphany, don't turn off the audience w/gratuitousness. Trust the audience. #scriptchat
12:58 am tadjemiii: I have an idea (steal if you dare!) ex arranges to watch ex have sex with her husband. Motives for scene drive the story. :P #scriptchat
12:58 am KageyNYC: #Scriptchat knows it's audience, no doubt! RT @walterhzownself: @KageyNYC see how easily we're attracted to this subject. ;-P
12:59 am chained: penis cocksucker dickhead arsewipe scumbag retard Fuckface whore tonyblair well #scriptchat has inspired me
12:59 am eyamie: @covermyscript I presume you mean it will be set in the past? lol #scriptchat
12:59 am GinySassenach: @covermyscript Don't give your secrets away LOL #scriptchat
12:59 am CtKscribe: Good reason why WOMEN need to WRITE nonshit scripts. >RT @mdaystory: @CtKscribe yes, damn hacks. And misogynists. #scriptchat
12:59 am cinekink: Nothing wrong with voyeurism - the driving engine for cinema! RT @jeannevb I bet we have tons of voyeurs tonight... #scriptchat
12:59 am dwacon: This week's Scriptchat transcript will come with a disclaimer? #scriptchat
12:59 am RexSikesMovieBt: yes & all th elemnts remain ,we dnt sacrifice bt stay on purpse, seek the highest form even if its basest act @elizabethkarr: #scriptchat
12:59 am BrandyDolce: RT @dwacon: David Mamet uses swearing to such a degree that he can make a clean line the most hurtful one delivered. #scriptchat #amwriting
12:59 am circlesoffire: @chained I love that tonyblair is on your list of profanities. :) #scriptchat
12:59 am jeannevb: @CineKink we have lots of voyeurs even on G rated nights ;) #scriptchat
12:59 am eyamie: RT @emventker: oh, in a scene, the only thing hotter than having sex is not having sex, hands down @art1032 #scriptchat
12:59 am scripteach: I'm sure I'm not the only one getting invaded by bots on #ScriptChat! RT @ant... Find my sexy and bitchy pictures inside
1:00 am shericandler: @jeannevb I'm watching ;) #scriptchat
1:00 am UncompletedWork: I'm going to enter this contest, @covermyscript cant win yet! @KageyNYC @CineKink @kingisafink @jeannevb @yeah_write #scriptchat
1:00 am KageyNYC: Yep RT @jeannevb u win RT @covermyscript ill use handcrank vibrator like eggbeater @CineKink @kingisafink @jeannevb @yeah_write #scriptchat
1:00 am Todfilm: The rape scene in The Accused. very well done. #scriptchat
1:00 am swillmag: @jeannevb Some people DO swear like crazy, & it's normal to them. But it's the writer's duty to make that clear to the audience.#scriptchat
1:00 am jeannevb: *giggle* RT @shericandler: @jeannevb Im watching ;) #scriptchat
1:00 am CtKscribe: Do you #ScriptChat people actually think JUNO was a 'real' example of a teenage girl? If so, maybe I can sell you some dirt weed. Call me.
1:00 am RexSikesMovieBt: write script 4 the reader & the audience - the director & DP will shoot it... but it shoud eb a captivating read 2 get it made #scriptchat
1:00 am GCGeek: @Samuraiko No worries. I tweeted about it too. I think it's funny there are Top Gun bots! :-) #scriptchat
1:00 am walterhzownself: RT @lizziside: Rape is sheer violence and power. not sex. RT @ShaiHussain:how do you write a rape scene when youve got nothing to reflect on? #scriptchat
1:00 am tracinell: good night all you sexy scriptchatters, & sweet dreams. ;) #scriptchat
1:00 am writeononline: RT @KageyNYC: #Scriptchat knows it's audience, no doubt! RT @walterhzownself: @KageyNYC see how easily we're attracted to this subject. ;-P
1:01 am blankethouse: @walterhzownself @KageyNYC ya I noticed an unusual amount of ppl on this weeks #scriptchat lol
1:01 am TheWriteScript: We need a separate chat night for rape/crime scenes. #scriptchat
1:01 am UncompletedWork: Name of tonight's chat? "This #Scriptchat Not yet rated"
1:01 am circlesoffire: That movie still makes me catch my breath. Such a knock-out. RT @Todfilm: The rape scene in The Accused. very well done. #scriptchat
1:01 am covermyscript: lol. yay! proud. @jeannevb: Xandy, you win: handcrank vibrator, like eggbeater. @KageyNYC @CineKink @kingisafink @yeah_write #scriptchat
1:01 am The_Jodi: Hell, yeah! @CtKscribe: Good reason why WOMEN need to WRITE nonshit scripts. >RT @mdaystory: yes, damn hacks. And misogynists. #scriptchat
1:01 am GCGeek: Definitely gonna be awhile until sleep :) RT @tracinell: good night all you sexy scriptchatters, & sweet dreams. ;) #scriptchat
1:01 am KageyNYC: They didn't found me ;) RT @scripteach But Puritans founded us! RT @Todfilm Europe sex is commonplace violence seen as offensive #scriptchat
1:01 am elizabethkarr: @RexSikesMovieBT I'm with you. fullbodied chars with point of view and emotional resiliency/authenticity I'll follow anywhere. #scriptchat
1:01 am jeannevb: Hey before we have a happy ending here, there's a NEW #film chat in town on Wed called #filmin140 http://tinyurl.com/2w987fo #scriptchat
1:01 am LauraVanVleet: RT @GCGeek: don't turn off the audience w/gratuitousness. Trust the audience. - And trust the director... #scriptchat
1:01 am GCGeek: Dexter's on. Great chat! Check ya later! :-) #scriptchat
1:01 am nisajaie: @jeannevb Just getting in. I will have to fly back out in about 20 (wonderwoman has to juggle a lot). What's the topic? #scriptchat
1:01 am jeannevb: yes! Will make note RT @TheWriteScript: We need a separate chat night for rape/crime scenes. #scriptchat
1:02 am walterhzownself: @shericandler I bet you have not shame in being a voyeur! ;P #scriptchat
1:02 am ShaiHussain: That's gonna be some traumatic researching RT @scripteach: Read survivors' stories. RT @ShaiHussain: how do you write rape scene #scriptchat
1:02 am GCGeek: Yes! RT @LauraVanVleet: RT @GCGeek: dont turn off the audience w/gratuitousness. Trust the audience - And trust the director... #scriptchat
1:02 am circlesoffire: RT @jeannevb Before we have a happy ending here, a NEW #film chat in town on Wed called #filmin140 http://tinyurl.com/2w987fo #scriptchat
1:02 am SissiePoohSOD: once again, I've learned so much from all of you. #scriptchat
1:02 am michael2172: RT @jeannevb: before we have a happy ending, theres a NEW #film chat in town on Wed called#filmin140 http://tinyurl.com/2w987fo #scriptchat
1:02 am rrrett: RT @Todfilm: That would be an interesting challenge, to write an explicit sex scene in detail. #scriptchat
1:02 am jeannevb: @nisajaie talking sex scenes... and no one's faking it #scriptchat
1:03 am Carlo_ThChThr: @Todfilm if we're talking rape scenes, I gotta go Demi Moore raping Michael Douglas in Disclosure. #scriptchat
1:03 am GinySassenach: Yes go over pov RT @TheWriteScript: We need a separate chat night for rape/crime scenes. #scriptchat
1:03 am karlabry: Ducking out to watch Boardwalk Empire now. And sex scenes. ;) #scriptchat
1:03 am shabanky: It was really HOT in #scriptchat tonight...enjoyed every moment;)
1:03 am KageyNYC: Yeah, more than when we talked Act 2 :) RT @blankethouse @walterhzownself noticed an unusual amount of ppl on this weeks #scriptchat lol
1:03 am FreddoJr: It's all sex and no profanity in #scriptchat. Everyone's making love, nobody's fucking.
1:03 am covermyscript: doing screenwriter karaoke work with @UncompletedWork for EXPO. he goes "are you watching porn?" "i said no, john foggarty" #scriptchat
1:03 am LauraVanVleet: LOL RT @karlabry: Ducking out to watch Boardwalk Empire now. And sex scenes. ;) #scriptchat
1:03 am michael2172: Thanks everyone this was more fun the sex chat in 5th grade because we also covered profanity #scriptchat
1:03 am jeannevb: For your homework, you are to attempt to write a sex scene... 1, 2, 3... go #scriptchat
1:03 am shericandler: nope, and no one to take it out onRT @walterhzownself: @shericandler I bet you have not shame in being a voyeur! ;P #scriptchat
1:03 am RexSikesMovieBt: MAybe sex in film needs more hitchcock - no pun - but suspense, thirll, move 4ward... bomb under table analogy #scriptchat payoff
1:03 am CuttingRoomMRB: Pun intended. RT @jeannevb talking sex scenes... and no one's faking it #scriptchat
1:03 am yeah_write: Wonderful chat tonight. Fast and furious. Thanks to everyone for attending. #scriptchat
1:03 am circlesoffire: Thanks for being so rad, y'all. Glad this was my first night with you. I'm off to see how many followers I lost. ;) #scriptchat
1:03 am nisajaie: @jeannevb Wow. Sounds interesting. The transcript will be a treat...I guess. Lol #scriptchat
1:03 am SharkGoddess: Great idea! THX RT @jeannevb yes! Will make note RT @TheWriteScript: We need a separate chat night for rape/crime scenes. #scriptchat
1:04 am covermyscript: apparently "who will stop the rain" sounds like porn to him. i'm not sure where to start here. #scriptchat
1:04 am GinySassenach: Until Next Sunday and Misery. Good night comrades! #scriptchat
1:04 am SissiePoohSOD: well, I'm going to scoot out of here & put what I've learned into practice. #scriptchat
1:04 am CtKscribe: Paolo, please no getting gas when scab faced killer is masturbating after us :( RT @pterni: @CtKscribe "OMG, had to get gas!" #ScriptChat
1:04 am LauraVanVleet: @Todfilm Yes I believe it was the first NC-17 #scriptchat
1:04 am TheWriteScript: Thanks, #treefort, for a great night! #scriptchat
1:04 am elizabethkarr: @karlabry Shea Whigham in #Boardwalk Empire has lead in @rfamovie I produced. :) #scriptchat
1:04 am tadjemiii: Being comfortable in your own skin helps writing sex scenes. #scriptchat
1:04 am Todfilm: Oh and I can plug another of our docs called Sex And The Cinema, it's on Netflix Watch Instant now if you're interested. #scriptchat
1:04 am GCGeek: @michael2172 :-D!!!! #ScriptChat
1:04 am eyamie: Goodnight all! It was fun. #scriptchat
1:05 am SissiePoohSOD: Night, everyone... :) #scriptchat
1:05 am cinekink: As to best *consensual* sex scenes, suddenly wanting to revisit "Late Marriage," an Israeli film that came out in ... 2001! #scriptchat
1:05 am yeah_write: Good night folks. Looking forward to next week's discussion on the script MISERY #scriptchat
1:05 am GinySassenach: So funny RT @covermyscript: apparently "who will stop the rain" sounds like porn to him. im not sure where to start here. #scriptchat
1:05 am jeannevb: believe it or not, our hour is up... you'll now be charged extra #moderatorpimp #scriptchat
1:05 am Todfilm: Gnight all. #scriptchat
1:05 am covermyscript: alright tyler durden. how's that army building going? RT @jeannevb: homework: attempt to write a sex scene... 1, 2, 3... go #scriptchat
1:05 am Timsn: Night everyone! Been fun #scriptchat
1:05 am UncompletedWork: Very happy to announce #Screenwriterkaraoke is going to the Screenwriting Expo 2010 at hilton LAX Oct 9 http://bit.ly/cvwrdv #scriptchat
1:05 am SWKaraoke: Very happy to announce #Screenwriterkaraoke is going to the Screenwriting Expo 2010 at hilton LAX Oct 9 http://bit.ly/cvwrdv #scriptchat
1:05 am art1032: RT @SharkGoddess: Great idea! THX RT @jeannevb yes! Will make note RT @TheWriteScript: We need a separate chat night for rape/crime scenes. #scriptchat
1:05 am dianewms: @yeah_write Goonight! Time for Desperate Housewives! #scriptchat
1:05 am CuttingRoomMRB: Can you really call that "homework"? RT @jeannevb For your homework, you are to attempt to write a sex scene... 1, 2, 3... go #scriptchat
1:05 am cinekink: @circlesoffire Yeah, I had a net gain of one.. but we'll see! #scriptchat
1:06 am brionykidd: Annoyed I missed #scriptchat ...sounds very interesting indeed. Sigh.
1:06 am GinySassenach: Thanks #treefort and @Jeannevb for another inspiring chat! @zacsanford has missed a great time. #scriptchat
1:06 am jeannevb: @LukeRomyn @ceebee308 shld have been here RT @CuttingRoomMRB: Pun intended RT @jeannevb talking sex scenes & no one's faking it #scriptchat
1:06 am cinekink: RT @Todfilm I can plug another of our docs called Sex And The Cinema, it's on Netflix Watch Instant now if you're interested. #scriptchat
1:06 am walterhzownself: @TheWriteScript I agree. That's a whole 'nother subject that should be addressed by itself in #scriptchat
1:06 am UncompletedWork: If you guys are coming to the creative screenwriting expo 2010 in LA come by and say hey to me and @covermyscript #scriptchat
1:06 am YRJewelryGal: RT @RexSikesMovieBT: MAybe film needs more hitchcock - no pun - but suspense, thirll, move 4ward... bomb under table analogy #scriptchat
1:06 am CtKscribe: Sex in film is great if organic, not gratuitous, it makes sense. Oops, guess I mean in a GOOD FILM, like only FOREIGNERS DO. #ScriptChat
1:06 am jeannevb: transcript up soon on http://scriptchat.com RT @brionykidd: Annoyed I missed #scriptchat ...sounds very interesting indeed. Sigh #scriptchat
1:06 am emventker: steve almond has the perfect essay on how to write great sex. key advice: don't use the phrase "disco stick" #scriptchat
1:07 am scripteach: As it should be! RT @ShaiHussain: gonna be traumatic researching RT: Read survivors' stories RT: how do you write rape scene #scriptchat
1:07 am blankethouse: Thanks all for the funny reads tonight. #scriptchat
1:07 am RexSikesMovieBt: #scriptchat write sex scenes tight no waste no gratuitous. write 2 make reader hot tht readr cant put it dn do this whenever u write
1:07 am LauraVanVleet: Good #scriptchat -thanks all..
1:07 am SharkGoddess: Bye ya'all !! #scriptchat
1:07 am tadjemiii: @Todfilm oh it is. I couldn't get past the first ten minutes. Maybe someday I'll finish. :P #scriptchat
1:07 am cinekink: And #madmen, too! RT @karlabry Ducking out to watch Boardwalk Empire now. And sex scenes. ;) #scriptchat
1:07 am jeannevb: @CuttingRoomMRB research is a bitch ;) #scriptchat
1:07 am elizabethkarr: @jeannevb 1st time in this writers room did not disappoint. :) #scriptchat
1:07 am PennyAsh: @jeannevb All your base are belong to us #moderatorpimp #scriptchat
1:07 am covermyscript: totally! RT @UncompletedWork: coming to the creative screenwriting expo 2010 in LA come by and say hey to me and @covermyscript #scriptchat
1:08 am CtKscribe: For all you writers out there who have no clue the VALUE of EUPHEMISM, especially comedy writers, you are greatly lacking. #ScriptChat
1:08 am CuttingRoomMRB: @jeannevb Have to agree with you there. #scriptchat
1:08 am keradford: It's all culturalRT @CuttingRoomMRB: Rather disturbing dont U think? @mdaystory violence usually easier 2 write than passion. #scriptchat
1:08 am scripteach: And we bow before you! Lead us you w/handcrank! RT @KageyNYC: They didn't found me ;) RT @scripteach But Puritans founded us! #ScriptChat
1:08 am blankethouse: @jeannevb @brionykidd up soon! Hahaha #scriptchat
1:08 am walterhzownself: Goodnight, fellow #scriptchat tweeple. Hope it was good for you. Time for a cigarette. Don't expect a tweet the day after. ;-)
1:09 am brionykidd: @jeannevb Thanks ...really appreciate your great work. #scriptchat
1:09 am CuttingRoomMRB: LOL High five. @jeannevb research is a bitch ;) #scriptchat
1:09 am jeannevb: thank you everyone for a great chat! Now let's hope the transcript site works! #scriptchat
1:09 am UncompletedWork: http://www.screenwritingexpo.com RT @SharkGoddess: @UncompletedWork When is that expo and where? #scriptchat
1:09 am walterhzownself: #scriptchat is over. Time to do some #screenwriting.
1:09 am jeannevb: @brionykidd *curtsy* #scriptchat
1:09 am elizabethkarr: @walterhzownself LOL unless U want to break from stereotype & send a tweet. Even flowers. #scriptchat
1:09 am dwacon: Great chat. Now, watching #Dexter. #scriptchat
1:09 am GinySassenach: @jeannevb the transcript site may be smoking. LOL #scriptchat
1:10 am jeannevb: I need a cigarette... #scriptchat
1:10 am scripteach: Now that @covermyscript is hosting Screenwriting Expo 2010 Karaoke, there's something to really go for. I'm going. Who else? #scriptchat
1:10 am TheWriteScript: Great #scriptchat. Thanks everyone!
1:10 am lizziside: Thank you all #scriptchat
1:11 am covermyscript: no, 'cause you're already smokin'. i'm gonna go have some sex now... by that i mean work. RT @jeannevb: I need a cigarette... #scriptchat
1:11 am chained: RT @cinekink: RT @Todfilm I can plug another of our docs called Sex And The Cinema, it's on Netflix Watch Instant now if you're interested. #scriptchat
1:11 am KeithShankar: A script without any sexual energy is a script that lacks, but a script that focuses on it is a script that sucks, imo. #scriptchat
1:11 am circlesoffire: @yeah_write Hey, sorry I missed your reply in the #scriptchat deluge...
1:11 am RexSikesMovieBt: wow now the refractory period begins RT @jeannevb: believe it or not, our hour is up... #scriptchat whewwwww
1:12 am FreddoJr: There's a beauty to perfectly orchestrated swearing that can create some quotable ear candy. Like Pulp Fiction or Big Lebowski. #scriptchat
1:12 am covermyscript: so excited to see you!! RT @scripteach: @covermyscript is hosting Expo 2010 Karaoke, something to really go for. I'm going. #scriptchat
1:12 am yeah_write: @circlesoffire I know that was crazy fast. #scriptchat
1:13 am GCGeek: @WriteOnOnline Thanks for the #ScriptChat RT, Debra!
1:13 am UncompletedWork: RT @covermyscript: so excited to see you!! RT @scripteach: @covermyscript is hosting Expo 2010 Karaoke, something to really go for. I'm going. #scriptchat
1:14 am MireilleM: @TiltTheMovie @mdaystory Glad you two agree. Without chemistry/believability the sex scenes just fail #scriptchat
1:14 am UncompletedWork: Did you know @covermyscript is one of #screenwriterkaraoke's favorite sponsors! #scriptchat
1:14 am The_Jodi: In my imagination I sounded that witty! @CtKscribe: Do you #ScriptChat people actually think JUNO was a 'real' example of a teenage girl?
1:15 am UncompletedWork: Hey @WriteOnOnline going to the screenwriting expo 2010? #scriptchat We'll have to sync up again if you are around.
1:15 am CtKscribe: 2Ucomedy writer wannabes: some of the best, heralded films, use EUPHEMISM: Spinal Tap, Caddyshack, Big Lebowski... get a CLUE #scriptchat
1:15 am The_Jodi: @UncompletedWork #ScreenwriterKaraoke coming back to NYC any time soon? #scriptchat
1:16 am covermyscript: *blush* RT @UncompletedWork: Did you know @covermyscript is one of #screenwriterkaraoke's favorite sponsors! #scriptchat
1:17 am jeannevb: @RexSikesMovieBT hope it was as good for you as it was for me :) #scriptchat
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